All Because Of You

Listen to the breath of my heart

The beat of my soul

It’s all for you,

You’ve turned me gold.

 

My soul no longer echoes.

Eyes no longer rain.

Cause of you I’ve stepped

Out of the shade.

 

My mind no longer hates

My lips no longer curse.

All because of you,

All because of you!

Life no longer hurts.

 

 

Author's Note

Not my best work but it was what I was feeling at the moment.

Reviews

[Sweet & Tender Hooligan]

Subtle yet poignant and sharp like a small blade.
For some reason it picked up pace from the second stanza
onwards and the second stanza stands out in an impressive way.
Reading your words you can almost feel the beat of someone's heart and the breath of someone in the reader's arms.

[Ashley Black]

this is really good i like it i think it captures what a lot of people feel. good job keep it up

[A.Lee]

This is nice! Maybe its not as good as YOU would like, but I think it still captured the emotion you were feeling and it reads really nicely. :) It has such an admiring, hopeful feel to it.

[rachielle]

This is a very very sweet poem. It gives me hope that there is still something to look forward to. The sweetness and the rhyme blended together to make one brilliant swirl of a poem. Great job.:)