Not Even the Gods

Not Even the Gods

A Poem by Empirik

From up above to down below
They remain in suspended form as a crow flies
Unchained by emotion and drawn together like syntax
Forever supported from the initial instance of risky communication

Across the seas
Entering the forest's chest while falling through the sky
Landing on heaven's door
Together unbreakable

Unstoppable wrath is no match
Nor mercy is able to discourage
The perfect from maintaining
A full heart

Convergence co-aligned inside
Warming material
Hugging across distances
Beyond boundaries or reach

Yet touched to the core
Sore from exercise and exhausted mind
Taking time to recharge, give back and gain strength
As time progresses

Forward we move
Parallel in unison
United in this presence or place
Made real by just the two of us

Warmed by a sun which we created as if the dream is everyday…Immortal.

© 2013 Empirik


Author's Note

Empirik
This is true...


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Wow, I found this one very deep, and nice my dear friend. Your words are a bliss to read....

I get here a very "Greek" feeling, as I prefer, through these words, the Romantic in you, and the Analytical in you, merge like Zeus's himself, and the powers he is capable off. Very raw, and honest, very heartfelt, and true, true-er can't be... for it's this beautiful, in the way it is...

" Forward we move
Parallel in unison
United in this presence or place
Made real by just the two of us"

I love your perfect ambiguity too, in each
and every artistic piece, for it makes you unique,
And it makes us to ponder, which I love...

You're such a true observer, in all... can't say it enough.
Your lines are like the gossamer, ink on perkament here.

Fantastic... I shall come over to read this more more and more... thank you.
I'm so happy to see you back on here. :D

All my best dear, X :)


- Elisa



Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Empirik

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much!!! Elisa, you are the best! Glad to be here too. I have missed my quill and more.... read more

10 Years Ago

Ain't it great? ah, love these words....!!! yep! we should be all together, as the old times! Can't .. read more



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Wow, I found this one very deep, and nice my dear friend. Your words are a bliss to read....

I get here a very "Greek" feeling, as I prefer, through these words, the Romantic in you, and the Analytical in you, merge like Zeus's himself, and the powers he is capable off. Very raw, and honest, very heartfelt, and true, true-er can't be... for it's this beautiful, in the way it is...

" Forward we move
Parallel in unison
United in this presence or place
Made real by just the two of us"

I love your perfect ambiguity too, in each
and every artistic piece, for it makes you unique,
And it makes us to ponder, which I love...

You're such a true observer, in all... can't say it enough.
Your lines are like the gossamer, ink on perkament here.

Fantastic... I shall come over to read this more more and more... thank you.
I'm so happy to see you back on here. :D

All my best dear, X :)


- Elisa



Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This comment has been deleted by the poster.
Empirik

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much!!! Elisa, you are the best! Glad to be here too. I have missed my quill and more.... read more

10 Years Ago

Ain't it great? ah, love these words....!!! yep! we should be all together, as the old times! Can't .. read more

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Empirik
Empirik

Molalla, OR



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I live the dream. Giving back to art as my breath. Exploring Creative Mechanics with every heartbeat. I love to...Never Stop Learning. P.S. All my images are 100% Empirik Designs property more..

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