Locked in love and passion

Love awakens in me like a dawning day
slow and soft with warm bursts of light
your arms give me shelter and joy
your lips give me passion and pleasure

 

It sets me in the mood for romance
I want to start with a slow dance
So, break out the oldies but goodies
and open the chilled champagne

 

Spin me around the room
kiss me and make me swoon
I have on my ruby slippers
and nothing else, as you desire

 

Kiss me in the middle of a dip
and pull me in closer in your embrace
burn my body into you, melt me
I hear your whisper of naughty ideas

 

making me shudder with my own need
let's take this dance into another room
where our essence will mingle with
soft candlelight and rose scented sheets

Love grows with each lyrical word
every soft sensual beat, I feel the heat
that leads to a passionate union
where love is made and vows are
whispered deep into the night

Reviews

[Michael X]

this sends a passionate shiver through the soul, really. and the romantic depth is fully engaging, a whirlwind if expostion, a moment held spellbound in the motion, the embrace, the still circle that loops as one, a unity of love and survival, the classic flow and form captures the dreaminess, the enchantment, the beauty overflowing, always a pleasure to read your brilliant work, thanks

[Jibey]

This is full of romantic passion - clearly in the lyrical mode, with the soft candles and rose scented sheets... kind of Hallmark/Mills & Boon..... Made me shudder with my own need too :-)

[BABSIE BEE]

Truly spellbinding...would love to hear chapter 2...so to speak. You have a very explicite way with a hint of love and lust, of putting this piece together. I soooooo loved it. Thanks for sharing.

Babsie Bee xxx

[Dylan Cook]

This is beautiful.

[deeps]

Wow! Such passion here. I like this.
It's very sensual as well. well written.

[Katherine Wyatt]

Feels like you have penned a dance of love.. It swirls with romance... Absolutely lovely!