A Lame Game.

A Lame Game.

A Poem by Mehak Mushtaq

Will it cost so bad?
Loving some one who makes you sad.
Unconditional love breaks no bones,
It breaks your soul to moans.

It's like no thorn, like no rose.
It has its own harvests and sows.
It kills no one whole,
Torments to the fragments of soul.

Do you believe,
That such love succeeds?
I've loved such love for a thousand years.
It yields life after showers of tears.

The sun never rises to light,
But, to fight away the night.
Stars don't shine to delight,
But, to kill the evil of the night.

Wait - patience enthrobs the heart;
Believe - faith fights despair;
Flow - need not walk, be carried;
Know - good goes around and bad comes around.

Life is a little misery and a lot of joke.
A story, a fiction not a folk.
Take it easy or be stern.
You can't be prepared for unknown turns.

But I can assure one thing.
Stability, it will bring.
A time when you will have to choose,
Whether let go or watch yourself lose.

Decide whatever. the end is same.
Love will come as a visitor lame.
And will come again or stay today.
You can't fight, you gotta watch it play.

© 2013 Mehak Mushtaq


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"The sun never rises to light,
But, to fight away the night.
Stars don't shine to delight,
But, to kill the evil of the night."

"Life is a little misery and a lot of joke.
A story, a fiction not a folk.
Take it easy or be stern.
You can't be prepared for unknown turns."

Those two stanzas stood out to me, they were definitely my favorites. This whole poem was very strong, and had lots of emotion and truth to it. Most of it flowed quite nicely, you did a wonderful job with it (:


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mehak Mushtaq

8 Years Ago

Thank you. (:
Amandaaa Caroline (:

8 Years Ago

No problem (:



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nice write.. really enjoyed it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mehak Mushtaq

8 Years Ago

Thank you.
So !!! beautiful , Amazing ...

Decide whatever. the end is same.
Love will come as a visitor lame.
And will come again or stay today.
You can't fight, you gotta watch it play.




Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"The sun never rises to light,
But, to fight away the night.
Stars don't shine to delight,
But, to kill the evil of the night."

"Life is a little misery and a lot of joke.
A story, a fiction not a folk.
Take it easy or be stern.
You can't be prepared for unknown turns."

Those two stanzas stood out to me, they were definitely my favorites. This whole poem was very strong, and had lots of emotion and truth to it. Most of it flowed quite nicely, you did a wonderful job with it (:


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mehak Mushtaq

8 Years Ago

Thank you. (:
Amandaaa Caroline (:

8 Years Ago

No problem (:
love is the sweetest feeling but as much as it is sweet as much as we feel the pain if this love is broken. most of the lovers suffer from heart breaks but we still can never live without love. the deepest the love is, the most pain is felt if it is broken. very nicely penned..

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Quite right. Well done, this. Thank you for sharing it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

its a gud 1... Bravo!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mehak Mushtaq

8 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
Zizzy Douglas

8 Years Ago

u welcum...
This was fantastic in feeling and insight, I enjoyed reading it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mehak Mushtaq

8 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
this one takes the prize. i have read several of your poems now, and so far, this one touches me more than the others. i hope you will write more of love in the future. well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mehak Mushtaq

8 Years Ago

I will. Thank you Quin. :)
At some points in the poem, it makes me think of a heartbreak theme, while others clearly show a clear story of love given but never shown in return. Both are tales that grab at ones heart, and makes those it grabs understand the emotions of the stories writer. overall a excellent piece for anyone to read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mehak Mushtaq

8 Years Ago

hmm then maybe, "Love's a visitor you can't tame". How about it?
mike

8 Years Ago

That sounds better to me. The word lame just didn't seem to match the poem to me, cause lame means a.. read more
Mehak Mushtaq

8 Years Ago

hmm, thanks for your suggestion. Imma modify my poem. :)
Great poem! Love it :)
Very strong words and had a nice rhythm to it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mehak Mushtaq

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Asya. :)

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Mehak Mushtaq
Mehak Mushtaq

Srinagar, Jammu and Kashmir, India



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Assalam-u-alaikum. Mehak, from Kashmir, India. I got introduced to Writer's cafe just two years, ago, I'm 18, now. Like colors, life is an illusion, too. Look inside of you, the devil you hide, the.. more..

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