Complaint : Human Nature.

A chance to live or a chance to choose,

A broken fist or a broken bruise.

A matter of fact, your coward human,

Why not unleash your demons when he's to run?

No bravery when there are sneers,

No song of victory when no one hears.

Care, be stern,

Don't let me burn.

What remains of me,

Ashes and part He.

Still alive a part of mine,

How can I die when I'm divine?

Reviews

[khalid]

it is such the mind provoking issue .. Are We Really Free?...this issue has occopied the thoughts of philosophers for many years and it still does. some think that human being is doing only what fate allows him to do, some think human beings are completely free, some think that people are free in some issues and they are not in some others...that is the human nature..

[Geon Quuin]

*broken bruise*

[David Scott]

The first lie, "you will not die".
The second lie, "you will not live eternally"...
You expose both here.
Well done.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you.

[Geon Quuin]

i disagree. you live on in the heart of the people you love and loved you. If your an artist, your legacy lives on your paintings, a writer, on your writings, a doctor, on your patients, an architect, on your buildings. To my eyes, we're all immortal.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

My thinking says, "Nothing that God created shall die." That doesn't mean death is a lie or death is a truth. And do we understand death enough to judge it? You're right in saying that memories live forever but we're talking of a completely different thing.

[Geon Quuin]

as an anti-theist, I shouldn't be saying this, but, I like the idea of being immortal. I deny my inevitable ugly end and substitute it with my fantasy.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Who doesn't like the idea of being immortal but he, who knows the truth. :)

[Geon Quuin]

knowing the truth and ignoring the truth are the same thing.

[Geon Quuin]

oh goodie! we're having an argument !

[Mehak Mushtaq]

LOL. No, we're just discussing it. :) When you know, you know. You can ignore the truth but can't take it off your mind. Doesn't matter if I say I'm immortal and ignore death, I have to die.