Translation 4.

Dwelling on dreams, I'm now a dream myself.

Thee made me mightier than fire,

I turned meself to plain water.

The roaring, wrestling sea, I used to be,

Lost all the pride when met the ocean wide.

Solving mysteries, making way for a thousand more.

Now, this strange longing to search for more.

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

Oh wow...I had two poems about the sea back to back in my RR queue :-D This is a lovely write.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you. :)

[KAOlmsted]

My pleasure.

[WingsToFly]

The roaring, wrestling sea, I used to be, Lost all the pride when met the ocean wide.

It's amazing, truly beautiful.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you.

[Jack...]

It is truly amazing how the arrangement of a few simple words and create something of such beauty.

You are doing your Father proud.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you Jack. :)

[quinfinn]

pardon the pun but, i love the fluidity of this verse. the water metaphors gave this life and imagery. very clever write!

[keyvan]

amazing....wow

[KurKota]

Very interesting ! The Sea...to the Ocean ! Very nice.

[Frieda P]

This one drowns me since i know it well....poignantly etched in water. Fleeting at best....nice one.

[David Scott]

Ah... So we see what becomes of the broken heart here... Well followed.