This Is The Time Of Our Lives!

This is the time of our lives,

so put down what you're holding behind your backs.

Give up crossing fingers and knives,

pile revenge up in stacks.

I'm coming to burn your wax,

what remains is your man.

Playing games, then life attacks.

See, I have this better plan,

casanovas, misers, those smart a*s 'men',

leave your titles, we gotta be human.

Do hell with Your hell, we're marching on to heaven.

Don't go bad, don't do me good, just do what is to be done!

This is no game, this ain't fun

journey to existence has now begun.

We're meeting God in the way,

no, on the hill He doesn't stay.

We're gonna walk, walk, stay awake,

What's reality? What at all here is fake?

You do a betrayal, so-called trust you break,

LOL Out of this you've made real and fake?

You're being funny, my God! Break bones, did ya ever break any soul?

You're not a part, you're not whole!

Made ugly and beautiful, faces.

Made folly and smart s**t, races.

You've been fooled by yourselves,

go cry, cry me a blood pool,

and do drown in it fool!

No where in heart God dwells,

He's quit making devils.

One has one enough replicas.

No cheap container faith fills.

You're being a misery for your lies,

you're being a fool, still believing in paradise.

This is the time of our lives,

So, bid your final goodbyes!

- April 9,2013

1:35 pm.

Reviews

[Frieda P]

I could hear this one as a rap in my head, your words come across loud and clear in this write.....very nicely pen'd.

'Playing games, then life attacks.
See, I have this better plan,
casanovas, misers, those smart a*s 'men',
leave your titles, we gotta be human.'

You tell em!

[Mehak Mushtaq]

You got it! I wrote it as a rap. I could sing it actually rap it when i was writing it. Thank you! :)

[Frieda P]

Yay me! My pleasure. :-) Featured review too....doing the happy dance!

[Mehak Mushtaq]

haha yea. :)

[Frieda P]

:-)

[Talal Hussain]

What a unique style of writing Mehak...loved it

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

A unique write to say the least...Well penned...:)

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you. :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I am with Frieda, I too heard this as a rap, excellent write.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you Neva. :)

[Leslie Philibert]

a great poem with loads of energy, a young person´s poem full of talent..

[Robert Strzalko]

A very spiritual piece filled with your thoughts about life.....

[quinfinn]

i am pagan, but, be that as it may...this is still an amazing write. i know great prose when i see it and this is...very nicely penned!

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you Quin. :)

[Salar Majak]

wow!
this is THE STRONGEST poem i have EVER heard!!
( You've been fooled by yourselves,

go cry, cry me a blood pool,

and do drown in it fool!)
these lines made me open my eyes wider and look through this poem, wow, i'm speachless

[Mehak Mushtaq]

OMG that's a huge compliment. Thank you so much! :)

[Salar Majak]

:) you deserve it! and it's not a compliment!

[Mehak Mushtaq]

:)