Senryu
A Poem by
Mehak Mushtaq
SECRETS
Your evil desires,
Most ecstatic memories
Secrets are divine.
© 2013 Mehak Mushtaq
Reviews
Your syllable count is off..but it is a great short
Posted 8 Years Ago
cool,,,,liked it..secrets are divine..i found something spl in it
Posted 10 Years Ago
cool,,,,liked it..secrets are divine..i found something spl in it
I like this. We live in the subtext ;-) Very nicely done.
Posted 10 Years Ago
I like this. We live in the subtext ;-) Very nicely done.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you Kimmer.
10 Years Ago
My pleasure.
very nice :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
very nice :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Great senyru :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
Great senyru :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
nice one!
leaves you wondering :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
nice one!
leaves you wondering :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
nice work, well presented
Posted 11 Years Ago
nice work, well presented
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Why does desire have to be evil? :)
Nice penning!
Posted 11 Years Ago
Why does desire have to be evil? :)
Nice penning!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
'cause evil is the most fantastic.
this is divine as is that picture, wow!
Posted 11 Years Ago
this is divine as is that picture, wow!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you Neva. :)
Excellent , I liked this senryu a lot.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Excellent , I liked this senryu a lot.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Mehak Mushtaq Srinagar, Jammu and Kashmir, India
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Assalam-u-alaikum. Mehak, from Kashmir, India.
I got introduced to Writer's cafe just two years, ago, I'm 18, now.
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