Senryu

Senryu

A Poem by Mehak Mushtaq
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SECRETS

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Your evil desires,
Most ecstatic memories
Secrets are divine.

© 2013 Mehak Mushtaq


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Your syllable count is off..but it is a great short

Posted 8 Years Ago


cool,,,,liked it..secrets are divine..i found something spl in it

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like this. We live in the subtext ;-) Very nicely done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mehak Mushtaq

10 Years Ago

Thank you Kimmer.
KAOlmsted

10 Years Ago

My pleasure.
very nice :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great senyru :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice one!
leaves you wondering :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice work, well presented

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mehak Mushtaq

11 Years Ago

Thank you.
Why does desire have to be evil? :)
Nice penning!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mehak Mushtaq

11 Years Ago

'cause evil is the most fantastic.
this is divine as is that picture, wow!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mehak Mushtaq

11 Years Ago

Thank you Neva. :)
Excellent , I liked this senryu a lot.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Mehak Mushtaq
Mehak Mushtaq

Srinagar, Jammu and Kashmir, India



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Assalam-u-alaikum. Mehak, from Kashmir, India. I got introduced to Writer's cafe just two years, ago, I'm 18, now. Like colors, life is an illusion, too. Look inside of you, the devil you hide, the.. more..

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