"Poetic Impression"

"Poetic Impression"

A Poem by EricGodsil
"

It is a lot like a photo-copier, or is it?

"
Allow me to capture your mind,
luring it into an open dimension,
holding it delicately in my hands,
my ink wondering over it's surface. 
Allow my words to penetrate its soft tissue,
soaking into your lobes,
words presenting an image;
a picture of waves of thoughts,
merging vigorously to create an idea.
Allow this idea to swirl uncontrollably,
encompassing your every dream,
your every aspiration.
As it funnels upwards let your fantasies be carried by it,
expanding across horizons and new frontiers.
Watch as your thoughts mingle with my own,
Our dreams, ideas, fantasies and visions become one.
Allow me to take the velvet reigns,
controlling the stallions which are our ambitions,
our passionate cravings;
steering you into my world as you take this ride.
Then gently I release the scarlet restraints,
allowing the beasts we tamed to barrel downwards;
explosively crashing into your open mind,
permanently leaving a poetic impression.

© 2011 EricGodsil


Advertise Here
Want to advertise here? Get started for as little as $5

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

[send message][befriend] Subscribe
JC
oh yea, dig this celestial fever of emotion, how a really good poem makes us feel when it brings our minds into the cosmos then crashing down, this gave me a Kerouac vibe not in similarity but in spiritual quality.

Posted 7 Years Ago


This amazing beyond belief! Why, oh why, does this not have more comments?! I am so impressed with this piece! Thank you for sharing!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice poem beyond the impression... great feel and comfort lines.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Great flow, just how I feel about poetry, myself. Wonderfully written, great write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really enjuoyed it! You formed your words in a way where you are reaching towards your audience and capturing there attention. Keep writing this was fantastic.

Posted 11 Years Ago


wow this is great. It kind of reminds me of a rap haha. I really enjoyed reading this and the flow was amazing :) Great write and thank you so much for posting!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

297 Views
6 Reviews
Rating
Added on September 14, 2011
Last Updated on September 14, 2011

Author

EricGodsil
EricGodsil

Virginia Beach, VA



About
I love to write. Usually I have to feel inspired though; which could be brought on by anything at any moment. I suffer from writers block for a good chunk out of a year. Once I start writing though I .. more..

Writing