The Love on Her Arms ♥

The Love on Her Arms ♥

A Poem by ~Wandering Soul~
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In dedication to the organisation – To write love on her arms (TWLOHA) always remembering and supporting those experiencing depression and self harming coping mechanisms

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She writes her love
In a thousand words
Shades of scarlet
Unspoken words
You never heard
  Athousand letters
Share them around
You each have a piece
Don’t make a sound

And she will write
More love tonight


She writes you a novel
Do you care to read
Passion stained pages
Cold truthful read
Misplaced blame
Pictures unseen
Deep-seated pain
Broken within she
Who feels the shame

And she will write
More love tonight


She writes her love
In so few words
No fault lies with her
Powerful words
No one ever heard
Darkest of dawns
Pen firm in her hold
She finished this story
Don’t leave it untold

With love she will write
Her final goodnight


© 2020 ~Wandering Soul~


Author's Note

~Wandering Soul~
ignore grammar etc etc
constructive critism welcome and encouraged! =]
thank you in advance

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amazing! i loved it. it flowed. yeah, with someone wth bipolar i totally understand what you are talkig about in this poem. i know a few who actually cut to heal the pain, and i've never been that way, so i don't know what that feels like. but you opened my eyes again in this poem.

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I lovelovelove this. So heartbreaking and yet, poetically beautiful. I love the metaphor of writing and the idea that someone in this situation could have been saved if their words were only heard. Great job with this!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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J.M
This poem was both very creative and original, and very beautiful. With it you have really captured the idea of self harm being like a message about a person's pain. Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love your writing because I felt emotion while reading it and if poetry or a story doesnt move me it just glosses over the surface without feeling or meaning! Great poetry! Shelly

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very amazing i really love it:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem is amazing. Thank you for sending it to me. Very well written and easy enough for me to understand.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is amazing. To write love on her arms saved my life and this poem really reminds me of those times. Great job

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

amazing! i loved it. it flowed. yeah, with someone wth bipolar i totally understand what you are talkig about in this poem. i know a few who actually cut to heal the pain, and i've never been that way, so i don't know what that feels like. but you opened my eyes again in this poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really nice...it is terribly grim ain't it...when the person you write for doesn't care much for your words..:) been there..know the feeling.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, this is amazing, great job on flow, the reader can feel every word so raw and clear cut!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, this brought tears to my eyes. Very well written. I like the tone this has. Its sad, deep, and very somber. Beautiful job portraying this...

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Added on April 28, 2010
Last Updated on May 29, 2020
Tags: To Write Love On Her Arms, Suicide, Depression, Saddness

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~Wandering Soul~
~Wandering Soul~

Australia



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I'm a 20 year old girl from Australia who has always had a passion for writing. It's my way of explaining things that I can't put to words - I write. I'm studying nursing at the moment so that in a.. more..

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