My Poem For My City

My Poem For My City

A Poem by Erjon Mann
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Its about the Capital of Albania,Tirana

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My Poem For My City 
Summer has forgotten returning this time
Birds have peregrinated and haven't come
And living things have forgotten they live

Skies are covered from strange clouds
Every day they block the light of the sun
Rain is so cold and the wind is so strong

Appropriate weather for a cold ice built city
For the place without any believing dreams
The famous place that inquisition of value  is real

© 2014 Erjon Mann


Author's Note

Erjon Mann
what can I say, this is how I feel when I walk in your streets my dear city.

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Great write, clear expressions, enjoyed

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Erjon Mann

5 Years Ago

thanks very much for the review. i really appreciate it.
Linda alexander

5 Years Ago

You welcome, take care
Well, the poem is good. Frankly, I really love the wiintry cold picture you have described in the verse. I think you have used projection in the text, the atmosphere to me doesn't feel as gloomy as you percieve it. Still, a nice write.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Erjon Mann

5 Years Ago

thanks...Its just cold feeling verses
Penny

5 Years Ago

Hmm.. my pleasure.

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Erjon Mann
Erjon Mann

Tirana, Albania



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just like a Thomas Mann character in his novels. more..

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