Amendment of a broken heart

Amendment of a broken heart

A Poem by Ermadski Erma & Rei Zy

The torn stuck deeply.

 

No qualm, you jolt it gently.

irksomely, I fell.

 

 

 

Your hold is gentle

 

Winter comes as the ice breaks

 

it melts as you came,

 

 

 

You came without say,

 

Mend the frozen berg inside,

 

As our body heats,

 

 

 

As hot as summer

 

As Your caress melts the ice

 

Deep inside ,it burns

 

 

 

As Gent as the wind

 

Like autumn, now I'm falling

 

As warm as sunrise

 

 

 

I won't mind the pain,

 

Secure me in your embrace

 

Make me warm inside

 

 

 

What else can I say,

 

I just want to stay this way

 

Mend it till it breaks



Slowly, gently, time plus love can amend a broken heart.


Sometimes we ought to feel that falling in love is the sweetest thing in the world. However, there are also times that due to the thing they called love, most painful things happens.  By then, we try to protect the site where we had been hurt, keeping it safe and protecting it from others to prevent it from being broken again. Well, it is a common misconception that the heart is like a mirror; once it is broken, it can never be as flawless as it is before. Yet love by nature, in its unpredictable splendor.  Amazingly, it will fix no matter how broken it is. It will cure no matter how deep the wound of the heart. In addition, time heals. Slowly, gently, time plus love can amend a broken heart.

© 2013 Ermadski Erma & Rei Zy


Author's Note

Ermadski Erma & Rei Zy
The first and last poetry that I will write, poetry is not really for me.
It never been hehe.. I just wanna give it a try...
this is just nothing I just really wanna try to write a haiku but it didn't go well. >.<
I just hope I'd listen to my literature Instructor back then, as I'd remembered she discussed about poetry.
but I'm a stupid student i didn't listen haha
too bad. hehe oh well, it already happened at least i tried. hehe

the explanation about what i meant by those lines are already there.. hehe
but if its kinda irrelevant, i also thought so. Yet that's what i had in mind when I made those lines. hehe

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Added on February 8, 2013
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Ermadski Erma & Rei Zy
Ermadski Erma & Rei Zy

Mars, Japan



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