You are the stars

You are the stars

A Poem by Eternal.Dreamer
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...and the stars are you...

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Oh, my dear morning star,

you came so unexpected;

Oh, my dear evening star,

you left me on this path misdirected;

Oh, my dear blazing star,

you filled my eyes with your lightness;

Oh, my dear falling star,

you disappeared with your brightness;

Oh, my dear guiding star,

you became my inspiration;

Oh, my dear polar star,

you still shine with your sensation.


© 2010 Eternal.Dreamer


Author's Note

Eternal.Dreamer
Ah, another poem about him...so far my favorite because it describes our short story from the beginning until now, I hope you'll like it.

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"you filled my eyes with your lightness;
oh mu falling star, you dissapeared with your brightness"
^^^favorite line
nice use of repetition(:
that's a really cool rhyme scheme! every other line rymes, while its counterpart, both begins with oh my, and ends with star. thats realy cool. keep it up(:

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Its beautiful! Love it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this a lot ! I love the shifts in stars !

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow this is really amazing, I enjoyed this alot. You write very well

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"you filled my eyes with your lightness;
oh mu falling star, you dissapeared with your brightness"
^^^favorite line
nice use of repetition(:
that's a really cool rhyme scheme! every other line rymes, while its counterpart, both begins with oh my, and ends with star. thats realy cool. keep it up(:

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Somethings happen in a life. Leave scars and good memories forever. A beautiful poem. I like the description and the positive ending. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this it's beautiful! and the picture it cool

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 12, 2010
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Eternal.Dreamer

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