I Never...

I Never...

A Poem by Eternal.Dreamer


I never looked at the sky with such a delight,

but then he was beside me.

I never listened the waves with such curiosity,
but then we were near the sea.

I never thought that a falling star can make a wish come true,
but then I realized I was wrong.

I never thought that I could love a stranger,
and now I'm reminded of him by every song.

© 2010 Eternal.Dreamer


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What a touching piece of togetherness. I love the structure of first line alone, second line together. Terrific examples of experiences too. Well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh i like your style. You bring this apparently ideas together and then fit them in. And more importantly, the deep romanticism in this work is appalling. Great job

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was so beautiful! It reminded me of a song!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so beautiful

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that last verse gives the feel of love at long distance- I think
Love remains undefined.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Elegantly minimal reminder of the mysterious power of the unknown, and its amorous agents.

Love, the strange wonder, travels to the beat of its own drum, moves enigmatically.

Fine poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A falling star can allow us to have more hope and allow a door to open. The ocean create peace. A beautiful poem. The old memories and music are what keep us content and leave us with pleasure thoughts. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hah, awh :) This is sweet. And that picture is really awesome!
Good write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Eternal.Dreamer

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