Possessed

Possessed

A Poem by Eternal.Dreamer






















I see a mysterious, distant, unknown land.


I see myself standing motionless;
I see you running away.

I see myself howling aloud;
I see your ears not listening,

I see myself there eternally;
I see you there for a day.

I see myself wanting to get away;
I see a memory of you that is not letting me.

I see us-me holding hands with a memory of you,
walking together, taking chances.

I see myself not being able to take any chance,
I see myself not possessing the memory no more.

I see the memory-possessing me entirely.

© 2010 Eternal.Dreamer


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Eternal.Dreamer
Another one for the bastard...

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the b*****d is blessed! a wonderful write incorporating a steady and subtle flow of emotions..its not one of those explosions of anger and rage..this is pretty subtle...holding on to the moemories and hope(maybe a little bit of it)... not only you have narrated you side of the story...the other side of the hedge seems to be pretty clearly visible...


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the b*****d is blessed! a wonderful write incorporating a steady and subtle flow of emotions..its not one of those explosions of anger and rage..this is pretty subtle...holding on to the moemories and hope(maybe a little bit of it)... not only you have narrated you side of the story...the other side of the hedge seems to be pretty clearly visible...


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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this is a very empowering poem.
i love the first and last lines;
"I see a mysterious, distant, unknown land.'
&
"I see the memory-possessing me entirely."

(Another one for the b*****d...)--hope the B*****d enjoyed ;)

Amazing poem!!!

:)


Posted 11 Years Ago


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i really like this, and your authors note as well

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Wow that was really good! Very...Impressionistic? is that a word? Well if not, then I made it just for you(:
keep it up!
~KIJ

Posted 11 Years Ago


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this is very interesting a little confusing but it was really good I love the picture!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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yes! write those b******s into a corner! lol! i agree, this is somewhat like a dream but it is very powerful!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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This is so very poetic...almost seems like i was reading about a dream.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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A great poem full of contradictions and contrasts, Thanks to the "you" character in the poem.. Well written, strong words but simple tone...Love your author's note though

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Yes those old desires don't want to leave us. I like the gentle and kind emotions in your words. Ain't easy to forget. Take time and a replacement. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Ouch.. That was a bullet.
Good write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Added on December 6, 2010
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