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Excess

Excess

A Poem by Robert delfuego or Ethan
"

if everyone is winning who is really losing

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Excess
Success
In society
If everyone's winning
Who is losing
Technically since everyones winning
Everyone losing
We are overusing the word special
For the special children and those different
But in all honesty children should be indifferent
Losing builds crushing character
It teaches people to pick back up the pieces
It releases them from over expectations
Of spectators
Because if we lose we
Are human
It levels the playing field down
To effort and excess ability to work to determine who deserves to be better

© 2012 Robert delfuego or Ethan


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Robert delfuego or Ethan
truth

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great message
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Added on October 21, 2012
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Robert delfuego or Ethan
Robert delfuego or Ethan

Indianapolis , IN



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Hey my name is Ethan I'm thirteen an the funny thing about my life is its one of those unheard and unknown tragedies . My life is better now than it used to be but has inspired a lot of dark poetry an.. more..

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