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A Poem by Eva

Peace all around but the chaos is in my mind 
How do I bring the peace back into my life
I feel the crisp air against my cheek 
the birds chirping in my ear 
I sit alone on the mountain taking it all in 
I'm calling out to you God pull this peace into my heart 
heal me, protect me and be with me 
You have seen it all
 you are the only one who knows 
Knows the depth of what happened
The depth of the pain and the deceit
I don't deny that you were there
  you are here now 
You saw
I heard you so clear the other night
A message brought to me
For only my ears
 You knew what I needed
I heard it but more than that I felt it
 there's no way to deny it
 In time you said
slow down 
cling to the truth and never forget it
 You brought the people I needed in my life 
they are part of this journey
 You said wrap that love around you,
 embrace it never forget it. 
One day when the peace comes you will remember this day
 it will all have been worth it I promise

© 2013 Eva


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Wow this is wonderfully written and emotionally expressed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Eva

11 Years Ago

thank you so much :)
Just have to say I love the way this poem looks on the page. Before I read it, I just looked at the way the words were laid out: it's very evocative somehow. I often forget about the little details like that.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Eva

11 Years Ago

beauty in the small things
I had to read it a couple times because half way through, it became a very speedy poem, and I couldn't get a handle on the details and that is why I love to read, to let the details of the writers' piece sink into me, however I really like it!! I really do! I realized the speed of it is completely accurate for this poem. It just keeps going and going and going. Nice :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Eva

11 Years Ago

thanks! i am def new to this. i literally wrote this in about ten mins straight from heart.
Wonderful prayer for pulling peace into your heart.
Eloquently expressed.
Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Eva

11 Years Ago

ask and you shall receive :)
zainul

11 Years Ago

:)

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Added on April 18, 2013
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Tags: from the heart, sad, pain, God

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Eva
Eva

oceanside, CA



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