Enraged

I dont know is this OK.

Enraged within in my soul
Who am I this is unknown
In anger I do not think
All I see is red
Wishing that I was dead
Not knowing when it'll happen
Not knowing why its me
Others consumed by glee
All except for me
I hate this life i wish it would dissolve
I want it gone this hate wont resolve
In life i cry
Even when i try it doesn't help
I still die a little inside
Looking for a way out of this life
I cant deal with this pain
That comes with this fame aching for love
I fell like a dove
Eating hate I have a bad trait
This trait is rage within my soul

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[better off]

I fell like a dove
Eating hate I have a bad trait
This trait is rage within my soul

These lines here pulled at my heart. This is a sorrowful write but written so well.