Dirt and Grime

Dirt and Grime

A Poem by Evan Kleve

There are different kinds
of dirt and grime
and different ways to see them.

Through mind and heart
or even art
But there's one thing that can help

Falling water pounding down
From plumbing or the sky
Wash away that dirt and grime
You and calm have common time

© 2011 Evan Kleve


Author's Note

Evan Kleve
Definitely not my best, but the idea just popped in and I needed to get it down. Enjoy and please, if you could, help me make it better.

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I really like this Evan! :) You have a wonderful way with words that paints a picture in the readers head. I liked reading this poem a lot.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This was a nice poem :) I did enjoy it :) It was a bit confusing, but still a good poem, none the less. I really love the last stanza. Rain is always a beautiful metaphor because rain is an amazingly beautiful subject. Great job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow, I love this. [I am saying this with more astonishment than excitment, which is why I put a period rather than a exclamation mark].This poem really spoke to me because, I thought of"dirt and grime" as a metaphor used to describe people that are being judged harshly by others. Even if that is not how you wanted it to be interpreted. I honestly loved the whole poem, I can't pick out a favorite line because I love the whole thing equally. This may have been a poem that just popped into your head and even though you say its not your best, it still impressed me a great deal. Thank you

Posted 10 Years Ago


I thought it was a little confusing at first, but after I read it another time... I thought it was a very beautiful poem. Wonderful job! :)

~Lizzard~

Posted 10 Years Ago


i think its lovely

Posted 10 Years Ago


Love this one, truth is involved. Nicely done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Simple and very calming :) The description is also very good, nicely written :)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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