27th. 8. 2014: The promise

27th. 8. 2014: The promise

A Story by Ève

27th. August. 2014

Once, a promise..

Stronger, kinder and wiser..

A silent seeker..

Today, a creed..

Tenacious, gracious and sagest..

A singing sophist..

© 2018 Ève

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Wow, Eve. You sure do kick a*s.

Posted 2 Years Ago


2 Years Ago

In a good way not bad I mean, with this poem of I course. I meant to add before
a singing sophist eh!? love your wry and sarcastic humor :) what a journey your poem speaks of .. from promise to creed ... your speaker growing some admirable qualities in their conviction ... then breaks into clever reasoning song ...showing the errors of his ways ... what a fine poem .. lots of "stuff" in it... my cup of tea for sure

Posted 2 Years Ago

Sing on, Eve...let the world hear the song your experiences have produced.

Posted 2 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sounds like a time of decision and change that came about in a quite remarkable way. Kudos to you if it was you or someone you know. to make those changes takes heart and conviction and then to realize in writing like this is sublime! Loved it!

Posted 2 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on October 26, 2018
Last Updated on October 26, 2018
Tags: promise, wisdom, kindness, sophism, seeker



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