Love

Love

A Poem by EverEmma
"

She must find a suitor

"
Flowers blooming
And I am choosing

Between love or money
Might as well marry a bunny

Sick and tired of the search
I will pray in the church

For my prince charming to come along
And save me from my swan song

Stomach churning
I am still learning

For I am to be queen someday
Hopefully I can keep my feelings at bay

I cry, I'm weak
I'm at the edge of the peak

I scream into the night
I will put up a fight

Until I get love's true kiss
Something in my heart will always be amiss

© 2010 EverEmma


Author's Note

EverEmma
This is not what I usually write. This has slight sense of humor to it.

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Very short & sweet, although the rhyming seems so forced sometimes. I think if you elaborated on this poem and gave it more depth it'd be amazing!
overall a good job :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Good poem with a clear image of feelings. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


The light overtones and sense of longing make this a very good piece of work. Keep writing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is definitely going into my favorites. It's humorous and light. Excellent piece! (:

Your friend,

Kristen.

Posted 9 Years Ago


"Might as well marry a bunny"
That made me chuckle. Anyways, you did good, putting yearning for love into words. At the same time, this piece shows how dedicated you are to finding what's right for you and not giving up on it. Keep your head up, always. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Perhaps, the time hasn't come yet. I could compare the persona to that of a flower which was just starting to bloom. The beauty was yet to be witnessed and when the right time came, the bee would soon hover around. Such a sweet piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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