Top Hat ♥

Top Hat ♥

A Poem by MissSpazztastic

Just a fantasy...

He takes his top hat off,
He throws it to the crowd,
He gives a little wave,
disappears into thin air...
He always wanted,
He always fought for,
He always danced with,
And he never denied... me...
I think he could possibly have loved me, I never took the time to ask... But when he wore his top hat, holding his cane and bunny ears in hand... I didn't have to tell him, because everything beneath the beautiful satin top hat... Was a man that loved.

© 2010 MissSpazztastic

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Author's Note

Tried for concrete. Dunno if that worked.

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I love the concept and the emotion behind it all. But the form of it got me a little confused. Hmm...but a good poem nevertheless. It has a seductive, yet, loving feeling to it. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on September 18, 2010
Last Updated on September 18, 2010



Columbia, MO

I'm a writer (duh) and I kind of suck at it, but I love critique and I can never finish ANYthing. Ever. more..