I'm Done

I'm Done

A Poem by Evelynn

It’s not any different
It’s the same as before
You’re still not sorry
And I can’t take it anymore
You say it was a bad day
And how you just blew
Well, it was right in my face
And guess what, I’ve had enough too
So you can take mean words and issues
And go walk out that door
I don’t have to take this and you know what
I’m done, I won’t take this anymore

© 2018 Evelynn


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Absolutely therapeutic Evelyn. Going through a tough time is never easy and when a person is being difficult it can really wreak havoc on your mind and health. So important that we shut doors to those who don't deserve to be inside anymore. Well said and firmly written. Love it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Evelynn

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much



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Powerful and straight to the point, your words clearly reflected rage.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Evelynn

6 Years Ago

Thank you!
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

You're welcome.
Bam! This was a thought strong written poem and I wish we can all do this when we feel the need too.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Evelynn

6 Years Ago

thank you :)
I quite enjoyed the "I Will Survive" and "Importune Me No More" vibes. Very strong and powerful. Line 6, 9, and 10 have a bit of musicality issues, and 9 and 10 seem to be unnecessarily repeating themselves. With regard to Line 6, a simple deletion of "guess what" would help the musicality, and what you can do with Lines 9 and 10 so the ending doesn't sound choppy and anticlimactic is:

"I don't have to-
I'm not going to–
I'm done!
I won't take this anymore!"

The poem as a whole is fantastic! Well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Evelynn

6 Years Ago

Thank you!
emipoemi

6 Years Ago

my pleasure.
Wow, the character is really strong. Walking out on someone you care about when you've had enough can be so hard to do. Nicely written.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Evelynn

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much
this is a well written poem, it was able to focus on man's emotions when in pain

Posted 6 Years Ago


Evelynn

6 Years Ago

thank you.
sette

6 Years Ago

very much welcome
I like it, it shows great emotions and a stand.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Evelynn

6 Years Ago

Thank you.
A punch to those that have wronged you and to the feelings you wish to rage, well done, good read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Evelynn

6 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Very nice! I could tell you meant every word! I like it! Good job!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Evelynn

6 Years Ago

Thank you!
Having a bad day is no excuse for taking it out on another. Powerfully expressed.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Evelynn

6 Years Ago

Thank you!:)
I like how it is clean and clear. You didn’t need any fancy words you just made your point, and I feel like that reflects the sentiment of the poem itself.

I liked the line “and guess what, I’ve had enough too”, because it seems to be giving incite into the words of the aggressor without actually stating them.

I’m glad I got to read it!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Evelynn

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much!

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Evelynn
Evelynn

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