My Wish For You

My Wish For You

A Poem by EvilAngel

I wish to see you fall to the floor

like I did

I want to see you squirm

clutch at your chest

because the pain is eating you up from the inside

have your heart ripped from its tendons

like I have

I want to see you hurt

as much as I did

bleed hopelessness and loss

cry tears enough to fill the seven seas

I want you to swallow all your sorrow

keep it inside

like I have

I want to not hear you when you scream

as you have not heard me

I wish to pretend you aren't there

begging for something you do not know

like you pretended

I want you to drown

under thick waves of despair

having your breath stolen

for moments at a time

like I have

I cannot say these things

because if the roles were really reversed

I would not be so cruel


© 2011 EvilAngel

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The mind springs an image of a cruel German officer standing over a battered and broken airman. Only sounds of gasps for air, and the clock behind Mein Capt.

Posted 7 Years Ago

Wow..very powerful.. I have gone through something like this.. People can be so cruel and act still like the victim.. crazy.. Excellent write..x

Posted 8 Years Ago

what a very intense poem....full of mixed emotions...keep on writing..:)

Posted 8 Years Ago

Nice ending and i like how you show your anger throughout the poem. Nice descriptions and metaphors.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on May 31, 2011
Last Updated on June 1, 2011



I'm sara, and my writing is an extension of my thoughts. Without it, my brain swirls with nonsense. When I write, it's as if I'm facing up to my thoughts and making them real. I'm still trying to figu.. more..

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