The Lady in White

The Lady in White

A Poem by Evil_Angel
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i NEVER write poetry hehe but i was inspired by the pic :)

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Back from wandering,

Lady in White

Back from uncertainty.

Too many memories

Weigh you down Lady in White

I eyed you through the darkness

In the sea where i nearly drowned

You were a pearl in the sand

Flawless, too deep to reach

You've washed away Lady in White

But maybe one day

When it is finally light again

You will drift back to me

© 2008 Evil_Angel


Author's Note

Evil_Angel
LOL this is horrible I apologize.

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This is far from horrible... it's quite good. Love the metaphor!

I eyed you through the darkness
In the sea where i nearly drowned

Those are great lines. The entire piece flowed well and I enjoyed it
all, though those two lines had a distinct pull to them...

Nice job! You should write poetry more often. Seriously. I'll have to come back and read your stories as well. A pleasure, thank you.


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.



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Actually it is quite beautiful. I love it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It isn't horrible.

Posted 9 Years Ago


No, not at all.
That was lovely!!!! Make sure you post it... I don't think it's under the contest.
I don't know why those things are so glitchy.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is far from horrible... it's quite good. Love the metaphor!

I eyed you through the darkness
In the sea where i nearly drowned

Those are great lines. The entire piece flowed well and I enjoyed it
all, though those two lines had a distinct pull to them...

Nice job! You should write poetry more often. Seriously. I'll have to come back and read your stories as well. A pleasure, thank you.


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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