stains

The pursuit of dreams may lead to scars & stains...

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Reviews

[HawkEye]

I find it ironic how even though your words are releasing to the stains that are left on us after time, how it also seems to bring about a new sense of hope. Perhaps that was the intention though, and I've just made myself look like a fool. Oh well. Beautiful write.

[Red Brick Keshner]

Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and inner journey with my writing. I am both humbled and taught by them. ☺

[Chris Shaw]

When I think of the night sky, the stars are often absent and the night can be black. However the starlight returns and with it comes hope. Never give up on your dreams. Beautiful verse, that took me on a journey.

Chris

[Neville]

my all too brief visit here just now, is but the first of many methinks .. Neville :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

stars may dim, but they are still felt years after their burnout.
love is so similar...broken chains, discordant strains, but still felt
for years.
j

[Red Brick Keshner]

Thank you, J. You are much appreciated.

[Jordan Deall]

Once again, you prove yourself a master.

[Red Brick Keshner]

Thanks Jordan. That means a lot in a generation that is challenged for perception beyond what is immediate.

[Judy]

I love this - the originality of it is amazing - the words, the tone, the emotion!

[Red Brick Keshner]

Hello Judy,
Thanks for these kind words and for your offer of friendship. You are much appreciated.

[Firestone Feinberg]

This is another of your finely-crafted gifts. You words sparkle and ignite. David

[Red Brick Keshner]

Thank you, David. You are much appreciated.