Love Is

Love Is

A Poem by Red Brick Keshner

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Love is in the horizon,
it sits upon the sand;
the whispers in the hallway,
revealing secrets grand.

It's dancing in the rain
and in the blazing sun;
the mighty flowing river,
the voice of a long lost son.

Love is in the desert,
in the oasis' leafy fronds;
the racing tiny tadpoles
in lazy summer ponds.


It's teary airport farewells
and walks on a moonlit night;
the gentle flowing breezes
that quiet the heart affright.



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© 2010 Red Brick Keshner


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Joe
Great poem! You truly do have a way with words. Just one thing...when you rhymed every second and fourth line (for example, sand - grand, sun - son), did you mean to rhyme "night" and "heart" as well? That kind of threw me off, because I was expecting a rhyme. But other than that, I thought that was beautiful!

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Joe
Great poem! You truly do have a way with words. Just one thing...when you rhymed every second and fourth line (for example, sand - grand, sun - son), did you mean to rhyme "night" and "heart" as well? That kind of threw me off, because I was expecting a rhyme. But other than that, I thought that was beautiful!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Added on February 11, 2010
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Red Brick Keshner
Red Brick Keshner

Brisbane, West Moreton, Australia



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My life is one poetic journey. If I am not reading or writing poetry, I simply live it. To me the experience of poetry should be such - to breathe it, create it, and receive it from poems and lives th.. more..

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