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Amidst the world's
Greatest beauties
Are it's ruins

Author's Note

I thought of this one day, randomly. So simple. So true.. I like to think of it as a potential aphorism broken down into poetic semblance.

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

Good one

[Corset]

So beautifully true.

[Exsanguination]

Thanks a lot!

[Lady Ra]

Wonderful. Well said. Love this.

[Exsanguination]

Thank you so much

[AJ Morelli]

Very nice, it does come across as a passing thought and that is a good thing.

A lot to be explored in those simple 8 words.

[Exsanguination]

8 words, my friend, that is all the subject needs; simple facts in brevity.. Thank you

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Few words packed in such a poignant philosophy.... very intriguing. I felt an ancient and sacred ground being unearthed. Nicely done!

[Exsanguination]

Thank you. It is sad--like why do flowers die? I suppose we must enjoy Beauty while it lasts, and recognize decay in acceptance, not regret.

[Exsanguination]

... And that comment about the ancient/sacred feeling... I seriously feel that too when I re-read this, it has that vibe :)