titim i ngrá le

titim i ngrá le

A Poem by EylonBear
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Haven't written a poem in a long time. felt like writing one tonight. this is the result

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Waves of light come crashing down
To make us all die and drown

But here a knight in pearl white
To come and save'us from the night

But in this night there be a treasure
For all to come and see and measure

And in their greed they doth protest
That more would be for the best

Let nature come and have it's way
Come take the greedy out a sway

In the lonely night she tither's there
To watch her knight both gene and fair

For love him does she wholly much
And wish he was hers to gen'ly touch

Though in secret he thirsts too
To never more say ado

In happenstance do keep them apart
They'll always be bound by thy heart

© 2011 EylonBear


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Love it(: Let me tell you, I hate dark poetry. Which seems to be what most people write about. Good job(: Most of it sounded happy. Thumbs up!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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"Let nature come and have it's way
Come take the greedy out a sway"
Nice! I like.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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This lovely poem beautifully brushes the soul and heart with a wonderfully expressive use of the poetic language.


Posted 8 Years Ago


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I loved your choice of words and how you played with them! You're definitely good! Keep on writing. ;)

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EylonBear
EylonBear

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My name is Deena. I started writing in junior high with a novel. I never finished it. since then I've written a number of poems. a coupld short stories and I have one completed novel in the revision p.. more..

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