titim i ngrá le

Haven't written a poem in a long time. felt like writing one tonight. this is the result

Waves of light come crashing down

To make us all die and drown

But here a knight in pearl white

To come and save'us from the night

But in this night there be a treasure

For all to come and see and measure

And in their greed they doth protest

That more would be for the best

Let nature come and have it's way

Come take the greedy out a sway

In the lonely night she tither's there

To watch her knight both gene and fair

For love him does she wholly much

And wish he was hers to gen'ly touch

Though in secret he thirsts too

To never more say ado

In happenstance do keep them apart

They'll always be bound by thy heart

Author's Note

Please comment good or bad I want them!

Reviews

[Brittany]

Love it(: Let me tell you, I hate dark poetry. Which seems to be what most people write about. Good job(: Most of it sounded happy. Thumbs up!

[NoblePoetsRoyalInk]

"Let nature come and have it's way
Come take the greedy out a sway"
Nice! I like.

[.]

This lovely poem beautifully brushes the soul and heart with a wonderfully expressive use of the poetic language.

[paparapapa]

I loved your choice of words and how you played with them! You're definitely good! Keep on writing. ;)