Eternal Wonder

Eternal Wonder

A Poem by Ezekiel Silver
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Year poem was written: 2013

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      A divine land of endless discoveries, 
               presented all around us. 
      Very few have the eyes to enjoy it's true form, 
               one that is most beautiful. 

      Incredible secrets are hidden amongst simplicity, 
               waiting to be seen. 
      This utopia possesses remarkable grace, 
               unable to fade away. 

      Our fantastic world is quite fertile with, 
               eternal wonder. 

© 2013 Ezekiel Silver


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No need for a comma after 'with.' The eternal wonder of natural disasters and man's inhumanity to man and his environment? You are young, mon ami.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is very true.

Don't use an apostrophe to make "Its" a possessive.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Ezekiel Silver
Ezekiel Silver

Nampa , ID



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I'm just a lonely young man who's recently graduated high school hoping to make a difference in people's lives with my work. Also, Ezekiel Silver is not my real name but one of two pen names I made. more..

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