Eternal Wonder

Year poem was written: 2013

      A divine land of endless discoveries, 

               presented all around us. 

      Very few have the eyes to enjoy it's true form, 

               one that is most beautiful. 

      Incredible secrets are hidden amongst simplicity, 

               waiting to be seen. 

      This utopia possesses remarkable grace, 

               unable to fade away. 

      Our fantastic world is quite fertile with, 

               eternal wonder. 

Reviews

[Gerald Parker]

No need for a comma after 'with.' The eternal wonder of natural disasters and man's inhumanity to man and his environment? You are young, mon ami.

[Marie]

This is very true.

Don't use an apostrophe to make "Its" a possessive.