Avalanche of Foam

Year poem was writtien: 2013

     Salt and water burst downward,

            a cold horror.

     More powerful than stone and steel,

            crushing both with ease.

 

     The ocean's roar bearing it's teeth,

            ready to bite the earth's flesh.

     A fearsome force of poseidon's wrath,

            bringing about great nightmares.

 

    First the enormous white fangs sprout,

           followed by a blinding blue.

    As it plunges upon the soil,

           destruction follows swiftly.

 

   This great wave of chaos appears to be,

           an avalanche of foam.

Reviews

[Leigh]

The weight of water bears teeth, your descriptions communicate the energy of nature well in this piece, I enjoyed reading