A Lonely Man

A Lonely Man

A Poem by Ezekiel Silver
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Year poem was written: 2013

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      I once met a man as I sat upon a bench,

        his spirit seemed scarred yet his heart pure.

      When I sat down he greeted me kindly,

        "Hello young man." is all that he said.

 

       I greeted him back and continued with a question,

        "Why do you appear so sad and broken?"

      The man smiled in thought before wisely replying,

        "Because I lack brotherhood with my fellow man."

 

       "If you lack your brotherhood why do you smile?"

        Was my response.

       He only said this before leaving,

        "I smile for I still cling to hope."

       

 


 

© 2013 Ezekiel Silver


Author's Note

Ezekiel Silver
This is different from most of my work so I would appreciate feedback on what's good and what's bad about it please.

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Hope .as you highlighted in this poem in a great thing .I appreciate the content but not the way in which it is written .Better luck next time.

Posted 7 Years Ago


(Well, I in a heartbroken state so you're not going to hear much from me.)

Hurray, for you poem

It was awfully great
Kinda' describes me in a way. Lonely. With nobody to comfort him. :/

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Ezekiel Silver
Ezekiel Silver

Nampa , ID



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I'm just a lonely young man who's recently graduated high school hoping to make a difference in people's lives with my work. Also, Ezekiel Silver is not my real name but one of two pen names I made. more..

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