The Pale Mountain

The Pale Mountain

A Poem by Ezekiel Silver
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Year poem was written: 2014

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      The sun begins to rise above the bleak horizon,

            standing over the blinding night.

       Seen in the cold dawn of the young morning,

            lies a grand and sky-vast mound of rock.


       Pale in the light of numerous pretty hues,

            like a rainbow of faded paint.

       In the pale brown and pale yellow,

            and the paleness of the pale blue.


       Blending together to create nature's dawn,

            for this rubble is the sun's canvas.

       Bearing the beauty of this subtle wonder,

            such a magnificent mountain of majesty.

© 2014 Ezekiel Silver


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Ezekiel Silver
Not sure about how well this one is. Please kindly tell me what you think is good and you think is bad about it.

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Love your poem.
It has depicted the beauty of nature wonderfully.
My favorite lines are:
"Bearing the beauty of this subtle wonder,

such a magnificent mountain of majesty.

You may take care of the second stanza.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hey, Ezekiel, You painted a vivid and beautiful picture, quite majestic. I would warn, watch your use of repetitive words in such close proximity and in a short stanza, other than that, this read very well.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ezekiel Silver

6 Years Ago

Yes I was experimenting to see whether or not that would work well in my poetry. I got the idea off .. read more

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Ezekiel Silver
Ezekiel Silver

Nampa , ID



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I'm just a lonely young man who's recently graduated high school hoping to make a difference in people's lives with my work. Also, Ezekiel Silver is not my real name but one of two pen names I made. more..

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