Einstein's Ring

Einstein's Ring

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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i hope you enjoy this go at an English sonnet and a bit of romancing the Science ... i added a haiku for the same title for fun .. let me know what you think :)

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Einstein's Ring

My darkness falls over your haloed brow;
beguiling my heart, seducing my dream.
These eyes in search, the sourcing of the Tao,
a beauty eclipsed beyond what it seems.

Fair light is bending 'round curves, thus renew
dark matter enraptured heart in the skies
my gravity closing  a rainbow hue
to gather wrapped fingers of stars and sighs

Your presence was hiding behind cold shield;
while lightning explodes in brilliant arrays
Light sounding 'round heavenly faces yield
sun rings while Helios tightly at bay.

Gaze not in wonder God's gifts that abound;
songs of the Universe sing and resound. 

Haiku (of the same title)

galaxies hiding
eclipsing eyes perceiving
light bends delighting

© 2016 Einstein Noodle


Author's Note

Einstein Noodle
from Wikipedia
"n observational astronomy an Einstein ring, also known as an Einstein-Chwolson ring or Chwolson ring, is the deformation of the light from a source (such as a galaxy or star) into a ring through gravitational lensing of the source's light by an object with an extremely large mass (such as another galaxy or a black hole)."[1][2]

dark matter: (same sourse)"Dark matter is a type of matter comprising approximately 27% of the mass and energy in the observable universe that is not accounted for by dark energy,"

dark energy: "a theoretical repulsive force that counteracts gravity and causes the universe to expand at an accelerating rate.
"Einstein's theories allow for the possible existence of dark energy" "

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For me, and aside of the Author's note, this was a meditation's experience, the connection with the higher divine power, the images You saw through it, the presence of Your lover whom was firmly there almost in each image, it was like floating through the universe, an experience not many can fully go through. an amazing sonnet Mr.E something new from You for me to read, and it was a pleasure and real joy, the Haiku is quite amazing and strong too, it's like a "waking up" message to open the mind, to see beyond what eyes can see, and in both poems I felt a sentimental yearning waving gently like the calm sea behind Your lines.

Thank You for sharing Your superb experience with all of us.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

what can i say Light ... such a sensitive reflective read and review on your part ... i could not fe.. read more
lightsong

5 Years Ago

You are always so very welcome, and I say that You surely have big and wide wings to adventure in th.. read more
Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

:))))))))))))))))))))))) thanks Light!



Reviews

galaxies of love hiding behind eclipses, just wishing they could show what is hidden.

like both the haiku and the sonnet....

you bravely attack the sonnet and do it with such finesse...i could never succeed at this form of poetry in a million years...it would sound so stiff and formal---you have a soft, supple edge to your writing...just creeps up on us in a nice way.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

oh my! jacob .. feeling so humbled right now .. truly .. i thank you for reading and for this review.. read more
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B.J
Beautiful encaptulation of words. There is an hidden energy behind your words. So intoxicating

Posted 7 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

i feel humbled reading your review ..truly! thank you so much for taking time and i am so gratified .. read more
B.J

7 Years Ago

I am truly relaxing a great deal more, able to read more and enjoyed your work. Thank you
Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

:) ....................
Holy shenanigins! The sonnet is beautiful and perfectly written. Your metaphors are so well done...I love all of it! And the hakiu...perfectly written and perfectly beautiful! You get two thumbs up from my corner. ~Sharon

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

Miss Sharon .. your review is so encouraging ..i had advice and encouragement from KL and Richard wi.. read more
Miss Sharon

7 Years Ago

Always my pleasure to read something of value! ~Sharon
I love the older style of writing and word usage. Olde English gets to me. Valentine

Posted 7 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

the sonnet almost forces it doesn't it?!! thank you Valentine .. for your precious time spent readin.. read more
this is so beautiful, i kept reading each line meticulously understanding the beauty as it unravels. your use of words are placed perfectly and creates such amazing imagery! Looooved this poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

thank you my new found friend ... rigid forms and rules are not my natural cup of tea ..with help an.. read more
dear E... Our earth has beautiful stones to be
polished and set into rings that reflect the
sun and the moon whereupon we become
an intricate part of the Universe. truly, Pat

Posted 7 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

wow! you read it again!!! thank you so much .. and yes it is .. and yes we do .. all the time, every.. read more
Patricia Wedel

7 Years Ago

You are welcome... Pat
dear E... "Light sounding 'round heavenly faces"
is an endearing thought. When days are dark and dreary,
it is just the shadow of an angel's wing protecting you.
Your poetry is a reflection of the stars... truly, Pat

Posted 7 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

thank you for starting my day with such inspiring comments .. i am so glad you enjoyed reading ...h.. read more
Your writing make me stop and think. This poem did.
"Your presence was hiding behind cold shield;
while lightning explodes in brilliant arrays
Light sounding 'round heavenly faces yield
sun rings while Helios tightly at bay."
Somethings cannot be controlled or denied. The above lines were my favorite. I love myth and tale. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry Einstein.
Coyote




Posted 7 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

and thank you sir for taking time to read and comment ..i do appreciate such good friends as yoursel.. read more
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

Always a pleasure to read your work and you are welcome.
I had to review this one again -- achieved, the sonnet, with iambics intact -- now darling, one teeny tiny tweak that by my logic shall not alter the iambics --3rd line change source to sourcing (H/S/H/S/H) -- as the inflection can then stay with the of, and fix the little H/H there.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

YES!! absolutely ... down right proud of myself ;)
Lyn Anderson

7 Years Ago

You should be, my friend. You should be. Maybe one day I will go back and fix all the ones I thought.. read more
Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

aaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrgggggggggh! :}
now you need to go into the other direction and turn this into a short story! :)

Best way to keep our minds sharp, hey?

Great work E......as is your custom.....

Posted 7 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

ahahaha ..a short story ..i have that recurring thought from time to time ..i am yet to find the cou.. read more

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