A Winter Poem

A Winter Poem

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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Cinquain: poem of 5 lines with syllabic counts of 2, 4, 6, 8 and 2 respectively.... the captcha for this one is "plainish" :))))))))) gotta love it right?!

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My snow
December's moon
Beleaguering too soon
the hearth that holds a fiery heat
now cold
E.
11/12/2018

© 2018 Einstein Noodle


Author's Note

Einstein Noodle
this is a poem i submitted for an on-line poetry class ... (for beginners) ;) and this is the first Cinquaine i have written

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An essay it is in brevity, so much said in so few lines. You have to love those shorties!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

thanks Andrew ... i take my lessons on that from you for sure ;) thanks for reviewing sir ... glad y.. read more
So much said in so little words. Most effective! Thank you for painting a picture clear!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

thanks for visiting Kitty Kat :) i feel pretty gratified it did paint that picture for you ..love an.. read more
The Winter's day seem to last forever. The warm days of Spring and Summer. Goes so fast. Your words, understandable, heartfelt and strong. Thank you Einstein for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

thanks for reading Coyote ... always blessed when you stop by
E.
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome my friend.
The Cafe seems to be on a roll with Cinquains lately, I think ;) must say, I love this one the most. Probably because you mention the moon here :D
Lovely imagery here and certainly doesn't seem (if you hadn't mentioned) like it's the first one you've written ;)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

thanks for reading and commenting Doc.... its how i learn things ;) yes... the Cinquaines seem to ha.. read more
Brief but no less wonderful for all that. Very well written.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

hey Ken!!! how great to say good morning to you today ;) though you reviewed yesterday ... its about.. read more
Two ways to read this lovely cinquain poem;, maybe the winter of your life or maybe a alove that has lost its warmth and gone cold.
The cinquain is a lovely form to write in, not too short and not too long :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

thanks for stopping by Stella ...glad to have met you ..and happy you landed on one of the few form .. read more
At least you fire up the imagination in this wonderful, formative poem. There is a subtle message within, too. Kudos Einstein Noodle.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

thanks Sami! i do appreciate your reviewing always ... see you on the flip side ;)
E.
Sami Khalil

5 Years Ago

As Always. You are welcome sir Einstein Noodle.
A beautifully written cinquain..those December
moons can snuff out the fire before we know
It..the warm love we once felt is gone.
.I like the use of the word beleaguering ..nice work E

Posted 5 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

thanks Fran .. i appreciate your time taken here always ... :) love and peace
E.
Lots of emotion hidden between the lines in this cinquain. A love affair gone cold and now the December chill hits even your heart. I like it, E.....well written. Lydi*

Posted 5 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

that's it exactly Lyd! thank you :) I appreciate your time always my friend
E.
i like that the moon can beleaguer. never considered that. thanks.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

i had never considered it either ;) thanks for reviewing Maxwell ... i don't think we have met befor.. read more
Maxwell Ryder

5 Years Ago

sure. no worries. I'll be around, hopefully.

The Ryder

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