My poem is Geometry

My poem is Geometry

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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just a bit of fun :) captcha for this one is "fumbler" ... ;}

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My Poem is Geometry
surgical lines draw
coordinating parallels on
metaphorical axis 
protracting angles
mesmerize my complex balance
of X and Y
internal compilations combust in
black and white my
pointed mind abstactions
obsolete
verbal gyrations this
body of evidence
twist and turn
 
my poem is geometry
and very hard to learn
12/17/2018
E.
Image result for euclidean geometry

© 2018 Einstein Noodle


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I loved geometry becuz defining space and objects is tangible, but algebra felt so damn meaningless with x's and y's & no concrete answers! I love your creativity in picking such a relatable idea to write a poem about! I love the way your mathematical terms could apply to many possibilities thru-out life, far from the buttons of any calculator! *smile* Hope your holiday season is sizzling with joy & good eats! I also hope this is a sign you're posting new writing more lately . . . my attendance has been sketchy, but I haven't seen you posting too much for a bit & we miss you! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

thanks Margie ... you know i luv ya!



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Interesting. Now you know I bring a lot of my own baggage to such a poem with my background in mathematics and physics. So when you sum this up with "and very hard to learn", this makes me wince a bit. But still when these ideas are applied to life and its goings-on, then, yeah, I get it, because in life there are often no understandable reasons for thing, although the happenings are cut-and-dry with very sharply drawn lines. So, yeah, I understand.

Best regards,

Rick

Posted 1 Month Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

ahahaha well ... for you actual geometrics may seem natural and easy .. and one must have a strong t.. read more
Only E=Mc(where's the squsred button) can even think about equalling the elegance of this fine piece. I don't know if I should be more impressed that you explained poetry perfectly, or that I now understandment geometry.
Now I am left wondering if you should take a crack at the big ones... The meaning of life, or love's infernal atrraction 😀
I love just picking a page of your work at random E. It always blows my mind, without fail.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

11 Months Ago

ahahahaha ... but we all try the "big ones" don't we!?? did you see the captcha note .. "fumbler" :).. read more
Lorry

11 Months Ago

I am going through a bit of a drought myself E, but when I do get inspired I am enjoying it more.read more
Einstein Noodle

11 Months Ago

yep ... me too! :)
I understand it, but cannot explain it in words as you have. Job well done, being one who is awful at all things mathematically complex I agree it is a very difficult subject to learn as are some forms of writing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

:))))))))) yes ... very hard to learn eh!? ... i had a bit of fun with this .. did you see my mentio.. read more
Lyanth

1 Year Ago

Clever, and true. Poetry is one of the mathematics of the writing world I suppose. Pleasure to meet .. read more
Let me rewrite the last lines to suit me...My life right now is geometry and very hard to learn...
On another note, how do you write like that, put geometry inside of a poem and it ends up being so nice like this. Were you a mathematics lecturer? Well done

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

oh i like that ... a life well ordered yet challenging eh!? ;) no....math held no sway with me until.. read more
"My Poem is Geometry" is a logical and creative method of representing your unique voice. A profiler or critic would surmise that you are an artist; a visual artist that is able to use a ruler to make measurements with shapes. The human anatomy is simplistic. Leonardo da Vinci was aware of this as well. Vincent Van Gogh used simplistic geometry to illustrate his abstract emotions. In contrast, Vinci used it to share realism. Art forms are categorized in three: 1. Realism 2. Impressionism 3. Abstract. We need these perspectives in order to be wholesome. Art spectrums range from the classical Roy G Biv color scheme. You manage to organize them very coherently with Writing, Lyric, and Art. Well done, old friend.

"My poem is geometry...It is very hard to learn."

Yes. Yes it is because some are not familiar with mathematics. Human brains tend to be either Left or Right dominated. I am a dominant Right Brained. However, I was able to train the Left side because I am a cynical logical individual. I started out Left Brained as a child. I am a back wards woman of development. :P

Thank you always for sharing!

sin cere ly,
V25

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

as a child i enjoyed math ... but it did not take long for me to dismiss it ... until later in life .. read more
Veronika25

2 Years Ago

Hehe. It is good to be back, E.

I actually hated math until I started sketching cons.. read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

V25 ... again ... i appreciate your review and positive feedback .. i think the sciences and art are.. read more
Sharp angles and precise words, 72 degree trapeziums in my brain, great,

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

"By George I think you've gotit!" ;) what a treat that you found this my friend! trapeziums eh!? can.. read more
Love the simple complexity of this one 'E'. Am reading Dan Brown's 'Origin' at present and love him or hate him he makes you contemplate life on earth just as this one does!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

thanks once again for taking time to read and review John ... i had fun writing this one ..and thank.. read more
John Alexander McFadyen

2 Years Ago

Read a few John Grisham myself. Love his writing. The Da Vinci Code and Angels and Demons are the st.. read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

ok! i caught the Da Vinci series at the movies ... enjoyed them all ... we're taking one of our dogs.. read more
geometry never made any sense to me, all those angles and equations... why do i want to know what the square on the hypotenuse is equal to ?

I do like your version of geometry tho' it is more appealing :)


Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

ahahaha yep...you are certainly not alone in your mathematical position Stella Armour ;) thank you f.. read more
ha yeah, I find that when I deep dive into an emotion the poetry of it all comes all to naturally - this is a fabulous trick I have learnt for writing the beginning of all my crappy poetry. If I even think of the work geometry my brain starts to cloud over. Jordan thinks I am hilarious as he is currently studying commerce / economics so his brain loves the deep dove in to maths - argh!!

I prefer to chase down the thought and suck 'em dry until I have what I need to learn.

Love Quirky You !!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

ahahaha yes ...its all about left and right braineology eh!? your too funny my friend ... you cloud .. read more
I was pretty good at Math until they started putting letters in it. And Algebra was simply a pain in my lower extremity! It sure is a most fascinating tool to converse with, though! ; )

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

ahahaha i was a terrible student of all math and science and history as well ... i stopped going to .. read more

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