Brilliance

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Brilliance

magnetic poles pulling

green Earthen 

grey rock pressing

instant   yet

drifting like John Deere Tractors 

lost in the herd 

slight changes 

brought a dramatic blaming

black holes of shaming

pondering   -   what was it?

some game of psychotic blood lust?

for HIM .... it was straining the

bonds of God and man.

for HER

it was writing poetry.

9/27/2021

E.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Diamonds are a long time in the making. Their brilliance is awesome. Their value, out of reach for many. Likewise to produce a poetic diamond, that too is of great value and rare, rare, rare. And love is brilliant too and in its purest form rare, rare, rare. I am reminded that it only takes a minute shift. A small pebble moving, can produce an avalanche. Can change the shape of a mountain. Can destroy the way it looks forever. Dear Mr E, your poem has my mind wandering in many directions. I am unsure of your meaning here, but your words give a spiritual feel about them and a feeling of what will be, will be. And I am still left with the diamonds. They are just as beautiful. They have not lost their shine. Wonderful poetry.

Chris

[Einstein Noodle]

absolutely love your impressions, Chris .. you "get" me ... as Lydi does as well .. it is admittedly pretty abstract .. but what can I say ..;} really appreciate you relating to love in such a way .. spot on says i! spot on!

[Chris Shaw]

You know diamonds can shatter quite easily. And love, well that can shatter too. Pleased to hear that I was near the mark with this one :)

[Einstein Noodle]

yes the can ... and what a tragedy for cutters when such a thing happens .. all their patience and precise taps and angles ... in pieces .. hurts me to think about it. ;)

[duff]

There are so many avenues to take here. Earth moving for stones and weather shifting our priorities. Challenging times take us to different places. Its hard to dodge the connection of money. Wonderfully creative. Definitely enjoyed this.

[Einstein Noodle]

what a beautiful review duff! you went with it .. yes! challenging times for sure ... wonderful reading of this my friend! thank you so much!
E.

[duff]

it was a very enjoyable read and you're welcome.

[Patricia]

Ah, my birthstone and such a wealth of beauty in it. Not exactly a rare stone though. Such a shame what it costs just to mine them though, more than money. Think of all the poetry lost by doing it and changing the landscape and environment. Powerful write!

[Einstein Noodle]

we shall have our sparkly things won't we!? i am grateful how far we have come tho ... we are responsible for the Earth ... only we can be proper caretakers .. thanks you for your kind review Patricia ... there are treasures galore just outside our doors eh!? ;)
E.

[Soren]

Opposing forces make up the world. The Ying and Yang that exists in all things. Deep and complex yet direct and simple. Very good.

[Einstein Noodle]

love your review Soren! thanks for taking time and sharing thoughts with me ... yes ... we are creatures of opposing forces .. inside and out aren't we?! ;)))))))))))))) peace and joy my friend!
E.

[Neville]

.. this is still and always will be methinks, a fine & glowing example of why I first fell in love with poetry my friend .. N :)

[Einstein Noodle]

your the best Neville ... could not be more encouraged by a review .. thanks so much always Nev!! luv on ya sir!
E.

[Neville]

........................... N :))))

[Throwing Romeo]

Rich thought provoking words
kindred thinker

[Einstein Noodle]

thank you for taking time and what a treat to meet a new person ... right here at the cafe' ... i will knock on your door shortly :)
E.

[Unspoken poet]

instant yet
drifting like John Deer Tractors
lost in the herd

Love this part, the imagery of john deer tractors getting lost is amazing,
makes one ponder just how lost one can be,
This is one wonderful write, you give words a unique way of how anything can
feel here, so nicely written

[Einstein Noodle]

i am humbled and graced by your reading down my streets young lady! especially appreciate you choosing this ... at first i wondered about the John Deeres ...but am glad i kept it .. it's an image i was attempting and you are the first to specifically mention it .. thank you dahlink! i love it!!! stay safe and joyful!
E.

[Lisasview]

Fascinating and intriguing poem..
Made me think..which is always good.
black holes of shaming..what a great line..
Lisa

[Einstein Noodle]

thinking can bring fruits or headaches to me, Lisa. ;) I hope your pondering was/is fruitful indeed .. be well and keep staying safe .. :)
E.

[Lisasview]

Oh yes, fruitful it was.. never headaches with me..Just good pondering..

[Pete]

the push and pull of existence. good and evil forces exerting their pressure in opposite. the struggles become our poems as we diamonds in the rough are polished in readiness for eternal life with the creator ... :)

[Einstein Noodle]

wow! YES! Pete! spot on dear friend! spot on! love this review .. what can I say but thank you ... peace and joy sir!
E.

[JE Falcon]

OK, now I see it. LOL --- And I really like the last four lines. :)

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ...................................... thanks JE!

[JE Falcon]

I've read it thrice, yet my eye seethe not, ah, blinded by its name.

[Einstein Noodle]

its pretty abstract JE ... thank you for your honesty in reviewing and i can not be more happy you stuck with it ... having read it thrice ;) ... i like the last four lines the best too ;)
E.