Brilliance

Brilliance

A Poem by Einstein Noodle

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Brilliance

magnetic poles pulling
green Earthen 
grey rock pressing

instant   yet
drifting like John Deer Tractors 
lost in the herd 

slight changes 
brought a dramatic blaming
black holes of shaming

pondering   -   what was it?

some game of psychotic blood lust?

for HIM .... it was straining the
bonds of God and man.
for HER
it was writing poetry.

9/27/2021
E.

© 2021 Einstein Noodle


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Diamonds are a long time in the making. Their brilliance is awesome. Their value, out of reach for many. Likewise to produce a poetic diamond, that too is of great value and rare, rare, rare. And love is brilliant too and in its purest form rare, rare, rare. I am reminded that it only takes a minute shift. A small pebble moving, can produce an avalanche. Can change the shape of a mountain. Can destroy the way it looks forever. Dear Mr E, your poem has my mind wandering in many directions. I am unsure of your meaning here, but your words give a spiritual feel about them and a feeling of what will be, will be. And I am still left with the diamonds. They are just as beautiful. They have not lost their shine. Wonderful poetry.

Chris

Posted 3 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Months Ago

You know diamonds can shatter quite easily. And love, well that can shatter too. Pleased to hear tha.. read more
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Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

yes the can ... and what a tragedy for cutters when such a thing happens .. all their patience and p.. read more



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I've read it thrice, yet my eye seethe not, ah, blinded by its name.

Posted 3 Minutes Ago


For some pressure turns what was into something more. While for others it is a moment to pen to paper.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Cherrie Palmer

1 Week Ago

Alot of my jobs (back when)revolved around stress and uncertainty it can be addictive. Makes every.. read more
Einstein Noodle

4 Hours Ago

yes ... steel is tempered in fire .. no doubt about it. would love to hear some of your war stories .. read more
Cherrie Palmer

15 Minutes Ago

I hide some of them in stories. I guess most of us do. But yes we could have a fine chat about th.. read more


one of the several reasons why I have recently absented my self from the café is that for some obscure reason unbeknown to me is that numerous reviews I have written appear to go missing .. I know for a fact I previously left my thoughts on this particular post (which incidentally, I think is one of your recent finest) ............. I could go on but for the time being I shall just bite my tongue .................. N


Posted 1 Month Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

doubly appreciated Neville! I am certain that at times .. if one does not erase cookies .. that litt.. read more
Neville

1 Month Ago


no problem Gene, always a pleasure and always min my friend .. and as far as that little gr.. read more
dearest Gene… this is beautiful on so many levels… it takes me to the Moon and back. Your Mind is a Treasure Chest of fun and frolic .. “Oh by gosh by golly… it’s time for mistletoe and Holly”… Wishing you a Holiday that twinkles like Stars and sugar coated Cookies by a Fire. tenderly, Pat

Posted 1 Month Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

thanks Pat! and back at ya! with thanksgiving in all things I do look forward to the miraculous birt.. read more
Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

Praying that our Leaders will be guided by the Star that we follow… Be well and blessed. Amen.. P.. read more
Pulling and pushing and drifting and shining, so much to think about…from the earth’s pull to the moon and tides to that radiant diamond, so clear that one can see reflection….slight changes, shifting…to the strength of religious overtones…quite a magnanimous feat, sir Einstein
Love it …
Bet B

Posted 1 Month Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

ah! so gratified and humbled by your words Betty .. thanks so much for taking time and your kind, en.. read more
Betty Hermelee

1 Month Ago

You’re very welcome dear E.
I was a jeweler for years sir Einstein, so I know their value, brilliance and different shapes. They are amazing and the work to shape, polish and produce are a wonder.
Your poem and your works are valuable and polished too.
Happy belated Thanksgiving sir.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

no kidding!! Sami! how very interesting .. thanks for sharing .. man .. there has to be a lot of sto.. read more
brilliant write here, love the last two closing stanza's wonderful and thought provoking write love this it will leave me pondering

Posted 2 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

thank you so much for your visit and kind words ... i am so happy you enjoyed and found something in.. read more
Wonderful write as it leaves one with so much to think about ;-]

Posted 2 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

thanks for taking time Willow! i am humbled and gratified it left you with "thoughts" :)))) thanks s.. read more
Wonderful poem ! , Diamond is the hardest substance on this earth , Like Love , it is not fragile , it is a strong bond . It's rareness and brilliance is in its hardness , it is what binds us together . As u said , it is like the strong pull by the poles of the other magnetic nd strong . When white light passes through that diamond , that light refracts to say so many things .. Just like love not a single emotion just a combination of many ....

Kathy

Posted 2 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

oh man! i love your take on this one .. especially your mention of white light passing through the d.. read more
Kathy Mc Cathy

2 Months Ago

Thanks E , when someone makes such lovely poems , one cannot resist to get inspired :)
Have a.. read more
Love this Einstein N
Words of a poem in the rough
Can be polished to shine too
Like a diamond in the ruff can be polished to brilliance
I had this vision of her his wife sitting writing at window on a farm him out on his tractor
In the distance mining ⛏ drilling black holes thunder
Well done it left us with our imagination to ponder 🤔

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

i love your thoughts and the images you saw in reading this poem, Julie! thank you so much for takin.. read more

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