Brilliance

Brilliance

A Poem by Einstein Noodle

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Brilliance

magnetic poles pulling
green Earthen 
grey rock pressing

instant   yet
drifting like John Deere Tractors 
lost in the herd 

slight changes 
brought a dramatic blaming
black holes of shaming

pondering   -   what was it?

some game of psychotic blood lust?

for HIM .... it was straining the
bonds of God and man.
for HER
it was writing poetry.

9/27/2021
E.

© 2022 Einstein Noodle


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Diamonds are a long time in the making. Their brilliance is awesome. Their value, out of reach for many. Likewise to produce a poetic diamond, that too is of great value and rare, rare, rare. And love is brilliant too and in its purest form rare, rare, rare. I am reminded that it only takes a minute shift. A small pebble moving, can produce an avalanche. Can change the shape of a mountain. Can destroy the way it looks forever. Dear Mr E, your poem has my mind wandering in many directions. I am unsure of your meaning here, but your words give a spiritual feel about them and a feeling of what will be, will be. And I am still left with the diamonds. They are just as beautiful. They have not lost their shine. Wonderful poetry.

Chris

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

You know diamonds can shatter quite easily. And love, well that can shatter too. Pleased to hear tha.. read more
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Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

yes the can ... and what a tragedy for cutters when such a thing happens .. all their patience and p.. read more



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Love and diamonds. both are pure. Remains intact through thick and thin. I appreciate how you used these to portrait how fragile the heart is. Well done, Poet.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

"Diamonds are a girl's best friend" right? ;) yes! through thick and thin is what strengthens the fa.. read more
The brilliance of a Diamond in the Rough is
often overlooked. It reaches up from the Earth to
celebrate Life and Love... when growing and learning together
will bring out the Polished appearance... as if the Sunrise
rose and settled on the divine depth of humanity's beauty. truly, Pat

Posted 2 Years Ago


Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear E... so many people are Diamonds in the rough... People are tough and can endure like Pearls in.. read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

thanks Pat ... T-Day was restful for me .. I spent the morning at Mass, cooked a turkey breast with .. read more
Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Gene… Roger and I had a restful Thanksgiving with Seafood Scallops.. thankful that we have.. read more
your talent shines through with this gem
Mr.E..those slight changes like the sands
of time take place with out us mere mortal
men even realizing those shifts

a powerful ending to this one
straining those bonds..for her
writing poetry ..nice work


Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

dear Fran ... reviews like yours make me wonder who wrote that poem??? truly! your remarks humble an.. read more
  Fran Marie

2 Years Ago

you re. s o very welcome E
This is so clever! What is earth shattering and intense to one, is something different to someone else. Poems are diamonds, rare jewels of thought and emotion and imagery. Flashes of brilliance that change each time you look at them. And writing one is like straining the bonds of God and man. Well done!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

thanks Zoe!!! for your sensitive insights .. for taking time to share them with me ... Thank you!read more
Had to make another response to say I like the song! ~SP

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Beautifully written my friend. Your metaphor is amazing. ~Sharon

Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

holy Toledo Ms. Sharon ... I am thoroughly gratified by your review .. thanks so much .. doubly so f.. read more
real brilliance radiates forever, and real brilliance is in your last verse! but we must agree that Diamonds are really beautiful aren't they, specially for us women ;) lovely brilliant poem Mr. E, of course I am there in your last verse ;)

Posted 3 Years Ago


lightsong

3 Years Ago

Happy morning from here Mr. Brilliance ✨
Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

awwwwwwwww your words make be blush darlin' :)))))))))))) been away on a vaca this last week .. just.. read more
lightsong

2 Years Ago

I hope You has wonderful time there, and yes You already know that You are "Brilliance" :)
A genuine poetic jewel to greet me on my return Gene. This is truly clever, and wonderfully well written. I am thinking that movements we can't see or understand can genuinely affect us in allsorts of ways.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

i do too Ken! the ebb and flow of so much that is alive all around us .. even the rock as you so mar.. read more
This is so nice! I have no words, especially the last line, beautiful man... I wonder how can you even write such pieces. This is literally called *Brilliance* (no pun intended, lol).

Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

no .... you are! ;)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
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grace

3 Years Ago

how sweetttt

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