Faith Hope and Charity

Faith Hope and Charity

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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a challenge from a friend to write these .. three haiku .. hope they speak to you. :)

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Faith, Hope and Charity 


Faith

shapeless water falls
veiled mist rises over rock
pools on shaded ground

Hope

Mountains crumble down
River silt rich dark with bone
Springs fruit not planted

Charity

Earth turns on axis
Self imploding creatures spin
Forests giving green

10/28/2021
E.





© 2021 Einstein Noodle


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I like your beautiful Haiku words….and how they
embrace each other, Faith, Hope and Charity, you use vivid imagery in all three….your description of faith is visual, your description of hope is depicted through a kind of tragedy, but with hope that life will be better, and you describe charity as a way of giving life by nourishing the earth with greenness.
Fine job.
Best
B.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

thanks for taking time Betty! I couldn't be happier to have gotten those points across .. haiku are .. read more



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excellent haiku's! I enjoyed these very much! Loved how you approached these with faith, hope and charity, very original!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

i was challenged to write them by a friend and welcomed it as i have been on such a dry spell for mo.. read more
Patricia

2 Months Ago

Well you rose to the challenge and succeeded. I’m a bit dry myself. I’m in a flat line place, no.. read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

yep! :))))))))))))))))))))))
Lovely poem .. Clever use of the words..Really enjoyed this read as my last read this morning before going of to practice piano..Chopin..this morning.
Thank ou for sharing your thoughts..
Lisa, now in Spain

Posted 2 Months Ago


Lisasview

2 Months Ago

Good observation.. might inspire a GRAND poem..
Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

:) ........................
Lisasview

2 Months Ago

Yes..........back
A great use of nature. Water so soft and flexible but it can cut the hardest rock, earth and the symbolism of creation all wonderfully crafted and merged.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

thank you soren ... i appreciate you taking time to read and let me know your impressions .. that's .. read more
This is really amazing, love the flow of your words.
I love Haiku's, especially when they just blend in form like this one.
amazing write here

Posted 3 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

once again i am in your dept Ms. Poet! thank you so much for spending time .. haiku are wonderful ar.. read more
Unspoken poet

3 Months Ago

I love haiku's they are fun to write and you are most welcomed
And all the time Mother Nature keeps her pattern of nurturing us all. Faith and hope, two very fragile things but nevertheless everything at times and the bounty of maintaning such is to see life is a balance. Balance is key. The sun always follows a storm :) A delight to reflect on these haiku dear E :)

Posted 4 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

4 Months Ago

yes! balance is a key to living a peaceful, healthy life .. balance with moderation in all things sa.. read more
Love the images your words conjure in these very creative haikus. The veiled mist over rock pools, the fertile, dark, enriched, life giving soil and green forests being spun by magical creatures. Indeed, nature is a lesson in faith, hope and charity!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

4 Months Ago

it tickles me ol' heart to know you see what it was I tried to do in this ... thanks so much Divya! .. read more
Beautifully written and presented my friend! I always enjoy reading haiku and senryu and they are not that easy to write. You "done good!" ~Sharon

Posted 5 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Months Ago

Sharon, you bless me with this review ... thank you very much for taking time and sharing your thoug.. read more
You did an amazing job on these poems. Challenges are motivating and often produce good results that make us believe in ourselves more, as long as we put forth the effort. These poems spoke to me with amazing imagery in motion. Powerful write. Tyfs

Posted 5 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Months Ago

yes .. the classic forms are just that for me .. in dry spells that challenge is worth taking on .. .. read more
jessy

4 Weeks Ago

just feel like crying, dont know that Earth means that much to you. Cant imagine about you. out of t.. read more
Now you know I am going to love this very visual and peaceful write. And I do.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Months Ago

thanks Ken! glad you enjoyed .. i always appreciate you taking time on my streets and alleys :) .. read more
"Self imploding creatures spin
Forests giving green"
Wonderful, perfect and meaningfully linked Haikus E.! Your evocative words and imagery sing of the caritas and changing beauty of Mother Earth, in the embodiment of Faith, Hope and Charity, in three of her different scenarios. Gorgeous alliteration. Superb and refreshing write.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Months Ago

i am graced by your words Annette .. thank you so much for the encouraging review .. i am humbled an.. read more

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