One Enchanted Evening

I appreciate Mr. Richard Rogers for inspiring this title and for all those who sang the song "Some Enchanted Evening" :)

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One Enchanted Evening

a dory small 

two   -   still fishing 

quieting their universal substance

so to understand the fueling  

of red wine as 

bold and joyful as blushing cheeks

a certain apprehensive bliss

where thoughts become thin white wisps 

melting into the blue drifting twilight

lapping ocean sighing

two oars tapping 

into the hinterlands

One Enchanted Evening

08/22/23

E

for Sherry

Author's Note

Reviews

[Dara]

This is a most ‘enchanting’ poem my friend. Sitting in a dory sipping wine to the sound of water lapping against the sides, it doesn’t get better than this. The version of the song you shared is my favorite one as well. Happy Thanksgiving dear E. xxx

[Einstein Noodle]

your pic blesses me ol' eyes, Dara! Thanksgiving was very fine. i feel joyful this poem touched you so. yes! a wonderful song and version in my books too. hope all is well and gets better and better. Christmas will be upon us soon. love and peace
E.

[MomzillaNC]

There's an soft, enveloping flow in this poem, especially in these words

"where thoughts become thin white wisps
melting into the blue drifting twilight"

[Einstein Noodle]

oh Momzilla!!! how very happy i am to have your read and review ... thank you very much! love and comfort upon you long time friend ;)
E.

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome

[Fran Marie]

"where thoughts become thin white wisps
melting into the blue drifting twilight"
....your words whisper moonlight enchantment
dear friend...softly flowing & ..beautifully rendered

[Einstein Noodle]

well Ms. Fran ... i have met a wonderment of a woman .. who would have thought?? and at this ripened age of .... well ... over 70 :)))))))))))))))) peace and love and joy dear Fran
E.

[Kelly Scheppers]

You are showing a side of you that melts me down like butter on freshly made bread. So beautifully orchestrated, with the lapping ocean sighing, and two oars tapping. Enchanting, indeed, Gene!

[Einstein Noodle]

oh my goodness dear Ms. Legs!!! i am so appreciative of you visiting this one .. after all you are the goddess of love .. right here at the Cafe' ... who else wears fish net stockings? :))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) thanks you so much for reading and taking time to review .. you have made me day dahlink!
E.

[Cherrie Palmer]

This poem was a delight to find and I for one couldn't be happier for you my dear friend.
Gene this was romantic smooth and full of new life and inspiration.

[Einstein Noodle]

you have blessed me my friend! very happy you found this one touched you .. love is a many splendored thing :)))))))))))))))))))))
E.

[Neville]

darn near blindingly beautiful my friend .. I wanted it to go on and on .. N

[Einstein Noodle]

doesn't it???? ;) love and joy brother .. thanks so much for taking time .. glad you enjoyed the scene
E.

[Tom]

Spellbound here afloat this enchanted lake, two lovers delight in the moment and why not? ' Tis what dreams are all about!!

[Einstein Noodle]

yes it is ...i so agree with you Tom ... for the young and young at heart :)))) so happy you were put in the moment
E.

[Sami Khalil]

"where thoughts become thin white wisps
melting into the blue drifting twilight"

[Einstein Noodle]

thanks Sami! :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly

[Sami Khalil]

Title and poem are soooo lovely; you must have caught the love bug under the "Blue Moon".
Stay happy my friend, stay blissful.

[Einstein Noodle]

thanks Sami ... yes love bugs can bite very unexpectedly can't they .. no matter place, time hearts .. it's what lends bliss during seemingly dark times isn't it!? thanks for stopping by to read and share your thoughts!
E.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! So true and well said. You are welcome sir Einstein.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Gene… the Blue Moon and I found your poetry to be amazing in the Night Sky… wishing you mysterious adventures with a touch of Romance 💘 as the Ripples of Light dance 💃. gently, Pat

[Einstein Noodle]

your reviews always tickle me Pat ... our super blue moon last month was spectacular wasn't it!? thanks always for your support .. right here at the Cafe'
E.