Young Love

Young Love

A Poem by Undying Hate (Hanna)

My first free verse. And a warning for the readers: It's not a very happy, beautiful poem!


Ahh young love

So undisturbed by filth

So pure and care-free

So innocent and amazing

So wonderful and happy

The way it lifts you up

And gives you that warm fuzzy feeling

And they way that special someone

Can lead you on and crush you

The way they take advantage of you

There's no such thing as someone special

In the end they'll all leave you

Destroy your hopes and feelings

The way they call you theirs

Then throw you out the door

Ahh young love


© 2010 Undying Hate (Hanna)

Author's Note

Undying Hate (Hanna)
Haha tell me what you think, I'll even take flames ;)

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Nice, sad but a fact. Nice one

Posted 7 Years Ago

So very true... I love the way you set up the "ryhthm" of this poem... Wonderful. The way you create the image in this modern way, it makes me shiver when I read on. Simply wonderful, Hanna-chan. Simply wonderful.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on January 2, 2010
Last Updated on January 2, 2010
Tags: love, anger, crush, special


Undying Hate (Hanna)
Undying Hate (Hanna)


I'm not normal, therefore neither are my writings. I write about a lot of different things with a lot of different styles. I like to mix it up that way, not be boring (hopefully)! more..