Abeyance

Abeyance

A Poem by Fadedspeak

In limbo,
highest in the air
where a bird could never grasp you.

When will you fall?
When will grace shelter its walls
and force you onward through the gloom?

You're frozen,
but I've never the verbs
to warm a heart ticking slower than time.

When will it end?
When will you descend
from where you're neither visible nor alive?

Angst-strangled existence,
war-torn, weightless;
trapped in a world of abeyance.

© 2014 Fadedspeak


Author's Note

Fadedspeak
Just a little something written during a bit of down-time. Quite the short piece, but here's to you all enjoying it nonetheless. :)

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"You're frozen,
but I've never the verbs
to warm a heart ticking slower than time."
I like this stanza especially, quite beautiful.

I see that you're new and decided to check out your first uploaded piece, so welcome to WC! I hope you enjoy being part of such a supportive community, and I look forward to reading more of your work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Fadedspeak

10 Years Ago

Thank you for the kind words, it's a surefire pleasure!
Be sure to check out my other uploaded.. read more
nice one
deeply pondering mind has written this.

best wishes

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fadedspeak

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, my friend!
Prritiy

10 Years Ago

you are welcome
I did enjoy iy, in fact, I loved it. Great job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fadedspeak

10 Years Ago

I appreciate the kind words. Thank you!

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Added on October 27, 2013
Last Updated on May 11, 2014
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