‘Breathless’

‘Breathless’

A Poem by ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹
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Suffocating souls of love🌹

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‘Breathless’

My heartache it
Steals
I cannot breath

I feel it in my throat
I want to choke-

The love
It’s stuck
In the pit
Of my soul-
Where it endlessly
Grows
Afraid to show

Because of things
We just don’t know

‘How will it go?’
‘How will I know?’

My stomach knots
With every blood
Vessels it clots

Emotions suffocating
Excruciating
Floods of
Everwaiting
Everwanting
Everlasting love

Turning around and
Around-
Endless thoughts
Endless sounds-
Passion profound
Lifting
The soul
Off the ground

Burning desire
Igniting
The fire-
Consuming
Lifegiving oxygen
Gasping
For air
Where are you
Out there

Leaving me bare
Naked and exposed
The torment
It grows-

Your heart
It only
Knows

The love it will
Show
Like a firefly
It will
Glow-
Lighting the
Way
On that
Oh so special
Day

Two souls entertwined
Unique love
Of only one kind-
Lifegiving kisses
For the breath
That was missing

Completing
Two souls as
One -

The journey
Has just
Begun .

Kelly Fagelund - Gjersoe
9 March 2018

© 2018 ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹


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Your poem certainly makes me visualize walking towards the woman I cherish in my life. Being unable to utter any words as the distance closes. Breathless as we may be from time to time our eyes tell the story. Nice work! Keep writing. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

And isn’t that the most precious feeling talking out of the depths of your heart and connecting in.. read more
i really enjoyed this post you have some brilliant pieces i will be reading some more, thanks for my review as im new im gratefull for critiques, good or bad

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

Your writing is amazing just love it you are very intouch with your inner being..you are welcome and.. read more
must consider this... one of my fav. poetry. eventually. had a great time with it. really liked the format u decorat ur words. quite mesmerising it is to be reading. the whole picture of this picturized love-vibes are well smooched at ur mystic work. very impressive. have at it! 🥂

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

Thankyou I’m glad you enjoyed it - 🌹
I felt this way when i met my husband. I love this poem so much.

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

Thankyou I am glad it brought back fond memories for you, Thankyou for your time🌹
This is a perfect love story. I remember when I felt this way with my husband when we first dated. He also kind of described what he was feeling the first time in the same way you did. I love seeing poems like this that make you remember a feeling or action that you've done in your life that was meaningful. I also like how you added in her actions of opening up to him. Keep up this beautiful work.

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

Thankyou for your kind words and appreciation- I’m glad it touched you- sometimes I look at my poe.. read more
Wanaka

1 Year Ago

I can't wait to read more :)
I miss feeling this way. Very passionate. I'm glad you shared this with us

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

My pleasure- dig deep and feel set yourself free🌹
Old Johnnie saying. Anything easy isn't worthwhile. Worthwhile things need time and patience. A wonderful and hopeful poem dear Kelly.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

Yes I know all good things come to those who wait through light and dark and hills and valleys but t.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome dear Kelly.
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mou
you have sketched all the colors of life with a poetic flow of how 'grey' changes to 'sweet red'..in life we experience all test of a dish sometime with a more salt or sometime with less sugar..but to hold a wonderful love,it's worth to bear all the storm..you have penned it with all your charming words and beautiful emotion..it's alluring
mou.

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

Thankyou and I’m glad it evokes feelings within you- important for us to feel , Thankyou for your .. read more
The full gamut of emotions described in relation to love in this piece. It is always ironic that Love can evoke such wonderful emotional peaks and troughs.

Words no doubt written with life experience, with wonderful flow and scatterings of rhyme throughout. Nicely conceived.

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

If we cannot put experience into words we surely lack and miss out in lessons learnt- Thankyou for y.. read more
Kelly - you so elegantly describe the agony and at times the ecstasy of love.
After years of being its '"victim" and at others its happy recipient I've come to
believe that in order to truly appreciate love one has to experience the wide
range of feelings it can conjure.

Take care and thanks for the wonderful write. Dave

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

Thankyou again for your kind words- yes so right u are but sometimes it drives u insane and if not e.. read more

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Essex, United Kingdom



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Writing poems of passing thoughts in time where time unwinds many thoughts and emotions all set for a certain place in time. more..

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