‘Misty Morning’

‘Misty Morning’

A Poem by ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹
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Misty thoughts so true🌹

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Misty Morning:

Misty morning
Fog
Lying on my
Heart
Touching
The deepest
Part-

Misty morning
Dew
Reminding
Me of
You

Hazy

Misty

Softly
Seethrough

Reminding you
That

Life it hovers
Under the covers
Waiting to
Discover

Emotions
So deep
And true-

Only when your
Heart
Is open
Can you really
See the truth

Days of youth-

Were yours and
Mine -

It’s all a fragment
Of this time

Cannot rewind-

Clear out your
Mind-

Return
To this place
And time

The walk is long
The gate is narrow-
The fog it shows
The way
To distant better
Days

Brand new ways-

Will you stay
Or will you go

The heart
It’s destiny’s
Call doth know-

Through misty
Walkways and
Blurry vision
It remains
But only
Ones decision

Oh misty
Morning dew-
How I’m
Reminded
Of
You.

© 2018 ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹


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dear Time... have you heard the old song, “Misty”? “Like a kitten up a tree I get misty just thinking of you”. Frank Sinatra and others sang it in the Fifties. Your poem is so much like those lyrics... so soft and beautiful. truly, Pat

Posted 1 Year Ago


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‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

Yes I have and what a beautiful song it is- Thankyou for your kind words- wishing you a wonderful da.. read more



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wow. just lovely. captures perfectly. led zeppelin had a song called misty mountain hop. could hear that song while reading your words. great job ...

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

So glad it took you places - I’ll listen to that song- Thankyou kindly🌹
Wow.... Beautiful! I loved it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

Thankyou I’m glad you like it thankyou🌹
Anjali

1 Year Ago

you're welcome!
It is interesting how the mist turns ones thoughts inward. One becomes reflective, eventually standing at a decision point regarding how to see or respond to events one encounters. Will we sulk, or utilize the ponder as a new formative realization taking shape in the midst of mist?

There is a lot going on in the poem,.plays on words and ideas that could be tighter. I think I get the style evoking an episodic recall of past event and considerations. Life does invite us to return to the present withdrawing out thoughts from troubling pasts and disturbing potential futures.

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

Many thanks for your wonderful thoughts and words- yes wishes and inner memories reminding us of wha.. read more
AllenS

1 Year Ago

Thanks for the poem
Excellent description of what we are, were and want to be. Our thoughts are a mist/fog when trying to reach for the pieces that put us together. We are simple and complex, get easy things wrong and hard things right.
We can hope for what we will be to be better, and aim for our goals, but while we are waiting for that to happen, the mists still pervade in our minds, when there are still unanswered questions.
Really liked the softness in these words, lie an almost sigh. Great piece.


Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

Thankyou kindly such nice words..I’m glad you enjoyed it🌹
Gentle, kind and wonderful flow of thoughts and words.
"Oh misty
Morning dew-
How I’m
Reminded
Of
You."
The above lines. Small things make us wish to be with someone in a better place. Thank you dear Kelly for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

Mist reveals all covered things through its transparency- my pleasure🌹
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are right. Make us wish for long mornings and smiling and kind faces.
Well, I haven't seen mist for a long time.....maybe i will in our coming colder seasons.

This one reads and concludes like a song; the simple words tumbling over themselves to its child like final lines. A reflection of the innocence of youth and youthful love.

Softly written and filled with a longing hope and wonder. Nice work.

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

Must keep hoping and wondering and believing otherwise you block your blessings- many thanks🌹
My heart flowed with the poem from line to line, from frame to misty frame...filling me with an optimism that through the fog I'll walk to a clear, sunny place. Yet, the being in the mist in itself is beautiful. My compliments on the beauty and serenity of life that is so reflected in this poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

Thankyou for your beautiful words- I’m glad it warmed your heart🌹
DIVYA

1 Year Ago

It is a pleasure!
mist,after rain or sleet makes me look at life differently, that there can be described as a ceasefire where emotions are concerned. nice thoughts.

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

Thankyou and what a wonderful way of looking at it🌹
sette

1 Year Ago

yes it is always better to stay positive.
nice flow,
sounds like you could make a song from it

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

I guess we can make a song out of any words thankyou🌹
RW Erskine

1 Year Ago

really good songs come from words that flow, with a story and emotion which you have done with this.. read more
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

Thankyou I’m glad it identifies with that , I appreciate your time🌹
one foot in the door and one foot out...remember a relationship so similar...
too much fog and mist...and past tears...was hard for her to see me with any objectivity...
the past ruled and in the end, the past won.
i relate to this...again i like your rhythms...and easy rhyme.
j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

Never easy when the past has got a grip on you- sad how we ourselves ruin what could be the love of .. read more

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‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

Essex, United Kingdom



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Writing poems of passing thoughts in time where time unwinds many thoughts and emotions all set for a certain place in time. more..

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