‘Nutty Normality’

‘Nutty Normality’

A Poem by ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹
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Mental dillusion of humankind🌹

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‘Nutty Normality’

From mushroom
Farmers
To Spanish
Speaking
Intercoms-

This is the norm
For nutters
Not quite
Grasping
Sanity-

Diluted
Vanity

From foot
Fetishes
To
Internet addictions-

Altogether
Undone-
Trying to find
Some fun-

A loaded gun
Held to their
Heads

Addicted

To meds-

In hope that
They can cope-
Making themselves
Choke
On lies-

Fleshly ties
Where the soul
Dies-

Asking the question
‘Why’?
Well-
Pigs don’t
Fly

In the month of July-

No use asking ‘why’?

You’ll land up mentally
Disturbed-
Your mind
Will fry

Stand back
Stay in track

Take your sanity
Back -

It’s self worth
That you lack .

Kelly Fagelund -Gjersoe
27 March 2018

© 2018 ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹


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As always, you do an artful stream-of-consciousness rhyming riff. Your lines are sassy & playful, as if a celebratory rant about being nutty. You have a very original sound, which is pure gold for poet (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

Oh sweet words and they are of gold to me - Thankyou for your precious heart and kindness always- no.. read more
This sounds like the stream of whats in my head stuff that I can't help writing from time to time. It feels like my brain had been given a big shake and the rhymes spill out. Fill up the page, sage or not, I know not! Most of the time I write normal stuff, right! Enough of this verbal guff.
Seriously, your poem flow along effortlessly and the rhyming is interesting , if a bit random. I guess we all fit that spectrum of nutty normality somewhere. I f you have time you might like to read my latest story called 'The day that time stopped for me!'
Thank for sharing this with us Kelly.
Cheers,
Alan

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

My pleasure and I surely shall- Thankyou for taking time and hoping you had a wonderful easyer🌹
well i wondered what happened to me,now i know it`s just normality

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

lol I’m glad you found your place in the sun...🌹
 wordman

1 Year Ago

yeah,me to
Nice! It treads on surrealism with a dose of understanding the thinking in a drug-addled brain. This is clearly a poem about drug-use but there's no judgement. You're able to convey the confusion and lack of focus within someone with a drug-habit. I loved the line: "Altogether Undone- Trying to find Some fun" This is a great use of language to show how and why someone feels the need to get high. Excellent job!

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

Thankyou and was a bit about all different things- thanku for your time🌹
A wild flow of words and thoughts in the poetry. When life become insanity and uncontrolled. Make us wonder. Is it life or us? I enjoyed your description of the wild day. Thank you dear Kelly for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

I’m glad you enjoyed it- well all we have is life and us- ourselves and the universe - needs to be.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

I did appreciate and you are "De nada".
Chuckling here... So few ...question... let alone think...anymore. "Go with it, use and use and don't worry, accept the way, DO as we say, go where and where you're told..." Dream on with THEIR dreams - nothing of your own. Hell of a world growing around us.

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

Lol it is so- crazy nutters out there believing things are what they are no matter how warped- but t.. read more
Chris

1 Year Ago

If you can't laugh all that is left are tears...
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

Tooo true🌹
so true, that the world is full of delusion, am I no exclusion? my conclusion, is that this is a good effusion.

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

LOl- a fusion of twisted confusion? It takes all types I guess and as I say you gotta be a bit insa.. read more
nobody asks why anymore...they just follow or hide behind their tv screens, or cell phone screens or computer screens...and waste away life...and that kind of apathy is like holding a gun to one's head.
j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

So very true people accept the madness others are swimming in as normal- well not me- Thankyou for r.. read more
"No use asking ‘why’?
You’ll land up mentally
Disturbed-
Your mind
Will fry
Stand back
Stay in track
Take your sanity
Back -
It’s self worth
That you lack . "

Very nice! This one was an interesting read and I found it very unique and brilliant!
We as humans often think of ourselves lower then we really are. I struggle with this and I really felt that your poem has motivated me to continue to work on that!
I love your poetry and I honestly think that you are one of the best authors that I've come across!
Keep up the good work!

Your friend,

C. Lee Battaglia

Posted 1 Year Ago


C. Lee Battaglia

1 Year Ago

You are most welcome! Thank you once again for your incredible poetry!
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

Thankyou and I’ll be reading more of your words soon- 🌹
C. Lee Battaglia

1 Year Ago

I really appreciate it!

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