‘Seagulls Cry’

Sign of knowing where the winds blowing🌹

‘Seagulls Cry’

Seagulls cry
My heart
Flies
To where
Your heart
Awaits mine
In that
Designated
Time-

A screech
So high
Yet deep

Promising me
Of love to
Keep

No need for
Hearts to
Weep-

When passing
Cries
Remind us
Why
Things
Are set to
Be -

Outside the
Borders
Of you and
Me-

Set yourself
Free

The seagulls
Know
No matter where
The wind them
Do blow

Where they’re
Meant to go
The wind will
Show
It knows

Just let go

Let your inner
Vision see
The part of the
Heart
Where your half
Fits mine
Two halves
Becoming whole
In perfection
Of destiny

There where
We are free-

Two heartbeats
Joining as one-

True flight
Just begun-

Reach for the sun
The sea
Together you and me

Where seagulls
Fly free.

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
8 April 2018

Reviews

[Traci]

"Let your inner
Vision see "

This speaks volumes.
I've read this several times and each time I fail to pick out a favorite line. Each holds such deep meaning, an essence of creativity and nature's beauty. Emotions penned so well throughout that is truly felt, far beyond these words.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou - this was written for a very special someone who’s brought many smiles and emotions to my heart recently- I’m glad that you enjoyed it and it touched the depth of your heart like the thoughts touched mine- grateful🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

Hopeful and beautiful words shared dear Kelly.
"Reach for the sun
The sea
Together you and me "
The above lines. A wonderful place to know. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Somewhere someday somehow- Thankyou for reading- there’s a place for everyone and everything someday...🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

I hope dear Kelly and you are welcome.

[An owl on the moon]

I miss the ocean, so your very title pulled me in. And these cries, the seagulls in their wild freedom, how they speak out over your life, this loving freedom that calls you home. Beautiful, mystic flow.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou- yes their calls and shrieks are voices speaking to our soul and spirit - must just take time to listen- Thankyou for taking time I really appreciate it🌹

[An owl on the moon]

Always a marvelous journey on your path...

[sette]

the creativity of the words displayed in the poem made me appreciate nature more.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou so much for taking time and I’m glad you enjoyed it - nature has so much to be appreciated🌹

[sette]

that is so true

[Lorry]

You have found true beauty in a sound and changed the way we will hear that sound now...Which is pretty impressive. It's almost like you speak fluent bird :)
Ps...i swear a gull just said something very loudly as I was writing this. That kinda freaked me out a little. Its 4am, who has anything to say at four am?
Me apparently. What was I talking about?
Oh yeah, Great words. Smooth, with a capital SMOO.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Lol- when you least expect it you will hear it- glad you will hear seagulls in a different way- thanku for being here🌹

[emmajoy]

Somehow i sense you sitting with a special someonw at night, by a small fire.. and you're speaking slow as slow, telling truths and tales of heart dreams you've perhaps not uttered before. Maybe it's because there's a dreamy quality in the way you've written.. slowly spoken gently nodding thoughts.. Its beautiful.. memorable, i feel like an uninvited guest.. Yes, beautiful,

' .Let your inner ... Vision see ... The part of the ... Heart ... Where your half ... Fits mine ... Two halves ... Becoming whole ... In perfection ... Of destiny ,.. '

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for wonderful words- so loving and kind- I sit by that fire in my hearts dream- it will transpire- one day- when time is tight all shall be - Thankyou again for your time I appreciate it🌹

[emmajoy]

Again, you're very welcome.

[barleygirl]

We must be on a similar wavelength, becuz I just posted a "seaside" poem, but I forgot the seagulls! *smile* I enjoy extended rhyming, but mine is stiff & highly-crafted, whereas yours is loose & carefree. I wish I could do it more in your style. You are one of the most relaxed & natural extended rhymers on this website. Your carefree style suits the idea of seagulls swooping free perfectly! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Oh such kindness of words and heart - it’s just me the way I am what you see is what you get- your words outdo mine many a time- beautiful always- will enjoy reading yours- strange - I live in a small village in Essex- we have a river nearby - seagulls all around- this morning I heard a sharp cry actually sounding like an eagle and when I went to have a look it was a seagull- so I wondered what it was trying to tell me- I also have many black Vries here which I live so- I hand reared one his name was Blacky but alas the Rottweiler was playing with him and bit him by mistake and he died- I miss him so- also hand rested an owl and used to offer a sanctuary for hurt eagles and falcons- love all of them- Thankyou for taking time- I appreciate 🌹

[barleygirl]

Thanks for the awesome feathered share! I love hearing about your affections! *smile*

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for taking time to be here- muchly appreciated🌹

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Sorry for mistakes meant to be black crows- which I loved so- and hand reared a owl- excuse mistakes🌹

[lightsong]

I always say it's not about writing beautiful words, but about the feelings You feel while You read these words, how deep, strong and sincere they are, about the thoughts... the thoughts that move Your mind as Your heart too, that's You and Your style brilliant Kelly* Your prayer to the sea, is loud, Your voice is heard, and one day so soon I wish, Your heartbeat will join His, into one 💜

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for always such loving kind words- I agree it’s tge words that touch the heart and soul not how grand or complicated- less is more- my hearts desires- blessings🌹