‘Confusion’

‘Confusion’

A Poem by ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹
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Lost clarity - out of bounds🌹

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‘Confusion’

Confusion
Is
When the mind
Has lost
All track
Of
Time-

When there’s no
Sign of
What’s
Yours or
Mine

When your
Thoughts
Turn
Around
And there’s
No
Balance
Or
Up and
Down

Confusion
Clouds
All sight
Around

The sound
You hear
Is
All but
Clear
And you
Don’t want
Anyone
Near-

But that’s
The biggest
Fear
Losing
What’s
So near...

Kelly Fagelund- Gjersoe
15 January 2010

© 2018 ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹


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Once again, you entice the reader into a world you have created that is believable, emotional, and full of wisdom that remains long after an initial reading

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‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

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Oh how kind- I try but share my true feelings as life I have experienced- it’s all in trying to ma.. read more
Traci

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That's what makes your writing so special. Your words are so much more than "just words", they are .. read more
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Years Ago

Thankyou for your words of kindness - for some they are too honest I guess and they choose not to fa.. read more
one of my fav. poetry! well honoured with ballistic words. truthful. encapsulated. admirable & quite categorical as well nicely framed 'pon the meanderings of life with "Thoughts In Time" feelings.

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‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Years Ago

Thankyou appreciate your thoughts and time taken🌹
I love how you used enjambment to create emphasis. Especially on the lines, "The sound... You hear... is... All but... clear..."


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‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Years Ago

Thankyou- glad you enjoyed it- Thankyou for taking time🌹
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Leo
Brilliant indeed..couldn't have expressed it better even if I tried..two thumbs way up

Posted 2 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Years Ago

Thankyou I appreciate your time🌹
yes, the fear to lose Your loved ones whom are around You, whom You can rely on, I think the better is to have some time alone, some solitude and try to meditate until our track is back, that fears is lessen, it will eventually, no matter what, sometime the confusion we have inside us, it's but the reflection to confusion which is all around us in life.

Thank You dear Kelly, for keeping sharing these valuable lessons.

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‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Years Ago

No Thankyou for always such wonderful words and understanding- we cannot allow ourselves to become p.. read more
Light🌟

2 Years Ago

and I can't imagine You but the Clarity of Silence 💖
Fear can be a controlling feeling, but you can always conquer it. I know confusion comes within, but slowly things will become clear.

Posted 2 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Years Ago

True- we can overcome fear- faith and love conquers all- thankyou🌹
Honestly, I’m confused most of the time. I mishear so many things and my friends think I'm crazy for the most part. Life likes to throw curveballs at you and normally you don't understand what is happening but you just have to try to see what is clear, if anything, and then make a solution out of that.

Posted 2 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Years Ago

There is an answer if you look deeper and clarity comes to those who seek- God gives peace- confusio.. read more
Fear is the one thing that leads to such confusion... I fear running into confusion, which sometimes my illness takes me to but I am fighting to remember, fighting fear before it makes me confused.... Thank you for sharing

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‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Years Ago

So true and once fear is overcome by faith then you have won the battle- praying for your illness to.. read more
The biggest
Fear
Losing
What’s
So near...

so dear things... always calls for fear...but if we conquer the fear with faith n love of not loosing...maybe we will be able to find a balance.... down the lane :)

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‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Years Ago

True wisdom you write hear all about faith over fear - fear is just a way to spur one on as long as .. read more
So true. Never take people for granted.
Cos when they walk away.
They walk away.

Posted 2 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Years Ago

True- but live is a two way street and if you don’t take note of it somewhere there’s going to b.. read more
Paul Bell

2 Years Ago

Silence sure kills relationships.

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