‘Free’

‘Free’

A Poem by ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹
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In cutting ties you set yourself free🌹

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‘Free’

I set
You free

From you
And me

To be
The best
That you
Can be.

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
1 May 2018

© 2018 ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹


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Simple yet so true in the face of reality,
sometime's trying to set yourself free can be quite difficult for some.
Great work! 🌷

Posted 2 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Years Ago

Free is the best place to be and when you are free we love feel and are just at our best- Thankyou f.. read more
Amy R

2 Years Ago

I agree, you're welcome 🌷
Simple words that mean so much. Sometimes, when we love something/someone we have to set them free. This piece spoke of a valuable lesson. If it's meant to be, then we'll they'll way back home. However, there is no guarantee to roaming. Not only is the person we set free is liberated, so are we. Taking time to self for personal reflection and growth is very healthy and often much needed for the soul. Great perspective. Great read.

Posted 2 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Years Ago

Thankyou - true are your words Thankyou for taking time🌹
Restrictions did good to no one, nor will ever. It is in complete freedom of your body and soul that you actually find yourself.
Lovely work.

Posted 2 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Years Ago

Right you are- true love sets you free🌹thankyou🌹
Zoya

2 Years Ago

Most welcome
takes strength & love to do it. they say that what is set free will return if it is meant to be. deep meaning grips & releases in your liberating words. thank you for sharing ... :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Years Ago

Truth spoken in your words- Thankyou for taking time- yes what’s meant to be shall be- all is well.. read more
When I was reading this there was an intangible element. It was like you were blaming yourself for something that you held accountable for. When you finally let go you can feel the weight lifted off your chest and you feel like a bird.

Posted 2 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Years Ago

Only accountable for loving so deep and true and feeling a spiritual connection to something/someone.. read more
when was i reading, i imagined the foreplay of man & woman on mind dancing feet to feet somewhere in dark doom of love. quite mesmering poetry u have come up which can't be explained in words, but well felt with heart deep inside the explosion through suchness of tender feelings. it's all what cherry 🍒 love be about that u have already romanticed in such pearls.

Posted 2 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Years Ago

Too true - it was an build up to feelings of love and emotions that brought this poem about you are .. read more
Impactful, like unleashing the shackles, a caged bird no more!~

Posted 2 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Years Ago

Yes the shackles of hell being removed- Thankyou for your time I truly appreciate it-🌹
Short, powerful, and so true. Only with freedom do we find peace to just be...



Posted 2 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Years Ago

So true- Thankyou for stopping by I appreciate it🌹
Yes sometimes we also have to set ourselves free from someone else or a habit or a scene to make ourselves free and be our best too. Good short poem

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‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Years Ago

So right you are we are only free when we ourselves choose to be free- Thankyou for stopping by I ap.. read more
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i agree with the message in this piece. Good read

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‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Years Ago

Thankyou I appreciate your time🌹

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Essex, United Kingdom



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Writing poems of passing thoughts in time where time unwinds many thoughts and emotions all set for a certain place in time. more..

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