‘Not Me - You’

The shift of blame leading to shame🌹

‘Not Me-You’

Oh-
What did
I do-

No-
It wasn’t me
It was
You-

You were my
Boo-

I thought our love
Was
All true-
Little I knew

Haziness
Blinded
The view-

There’s only
A few
That the true me
They knew-

Better later
Than
Never

Or

Why
Was it ever-

The questions
The doubt

Let it all
Out-

Replace mistrust
With a plus
Rebuild the
Trust
It’s oh
So a
Must-

The view
It’s all new
Occupied by
Few-

Less is more
Don’t block
The door

Those that
You’d
Defiantly
Die for-

They touch
Your core

No space for
Lack of taste

No time to
Waste

Less speed

More haste.

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
22 July 2018

Reviews

[Neville]

as I traced down the page, I was captivated by your ability to find rhyming words for just about anything.. I am also very nosey and find myself wondering whether this fine poem is autobiographical or the product of your imagination... :)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Curiosity killed the cat lol- no- all my poems come from myself reflecting on lifes happenings- i sit i reflect i ponder and it will be the eords resonating what im feeling at that time- heart and mind..,🌹

[Neville]

then you are indeed a poet with a big heart....

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Ive been told so...🌹🌹🌹🌹

[Neville]

I'm telling ya..

[midniterider]

you seem to know what you want from love,and i truly believe you should actually feel it

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Oh yes I do -waited and trusted a long time for the right one to come along and will carry on waiting- try- if it must be it will come to me - Thankyou for stopping to read🌹

[midniterider]

my pleasure

[lightsong]

a relationship needs work from both sides, first the important thing is knowing that they belong to each others, then comes the harmony,the understanding, the care, etc... trust as You say is a "must", when they know each others like they know themselves, there must be not a single doubt in trusting each others.

There’s only
A few
That the true me
They knew-

Sometimes, my dear Kelly, You try so hard, so hard... to show Your true self to the one You love, and sometimes You feel that something is wrong and You fail, it hurts like hell... it does, when You feel Him all, and You feel that he doesn't do the same for You... some thing never spoken, they are felt, only felt.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Some things don’t need to be spoken only felt and if we cannot feel that depth in others than it’s just net meant to be- people need to look and feel deeper- Thankyou again for your wonderful words and understanding- sending lots of love and blessingsxx🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

Take two to tangle and two to part. Waste and haste make us forget. Rome wasn't built in a day. People want too much or too little. Lead with concern, kindness and love. Hope for a good ending. Thank you dear Kelly for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

You are so right- if we trust our heart and hear it’s truth- we can only have a goid ending- my ending is still to come and to be together with that special one who’s heart only lingers on me and mine- Thankyou again🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Kelly.

[¿]

I love to scroll the page of your poems and to get some intriguing one by one ;)! "Less is more...Don't block the door"....am happy to grab this quote...thanks for sharing....tis an amazing read :)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

I’m so glad it inspires you- we cannot waste time in things and people that aren’t meant to be- be blessed, Thankyou for your time🌹

[¿]

You're already heartedly welcome!😊

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

[Ardra]

Those that
You’d
Defiantly
Die for-

They touch
Your core

Beautiful Kelly... good to see you back and your lovely poems..:)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou sweet soul- I’m glad to be back - Thankyou for your time and kindness- hope you are well🌹

[Ardra]

Getting better... 😘😘

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

So glad to hear- lots of healing blessings being sent your way🌹

[Onlyme]

Now, this was deep, dramatic and profound. Dark and scary even Really good read.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou I’m glad you enjoyed it- the depth reveals all 🌹

[Onlyme]

It does. it like climbing stairs deeper and deeper into it you go. Nicely done. May I add.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou- when the heart speaks it can’t be wrong 🌹

[Onlyme]

exactly dear Rose.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹