‘Touch’

When resistance crumbles and it’s love upon which you stumble🌹

‘Touch’

I wonder
What
It would be
Like
To feel
Your touch-

Perhaps
I’d like it
Too much-

Forget all
The fuss
And
Rush
Into your
Arms-

Embracing
The charm
Can’t cause
Any harm-

Oh
How I wonder

Thoughts
Set asunder

Images a
Wander-
Full force
And into
Love
Plunder

Your touch

Roaring
Thunder

Fireworks

The depths
Igniting

No use
Emotions
Fighting-

Heart beats
They’re flying
To where
Our loves
Dying

To embrace
The touch-
Not asking
Much

Except
The trust
From our
Youth-
To set free
The love
That’s shared
Between
You
And me-

Why do hearts
Flee-

Deserting
The you
Inside me-
To be a part
Of two hearts
Becoming
One
At the rising
Of the sun-

Moonbeams
Sewing the seams
Of two lovers
Dreams

Unity

Lost streams

New hope
For two
Hearts-

Lost

And torn apart-

Missing that
Inner part
Of
Truth

Love

And
Care

Willing to share
All challenges
Of time

Where your touch
Becomes mine

It’s just a matter
Of time

I’ll bet
A dollar
And a dime

One day

You’ll be
Mine .

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
29 July 2018

Reviews

[Abhishek Izy]

Wow!! This is so well sensual write. Beautiful is all I could say. Beautiful to hear and beautiful to feel. Remarkable piece, I absolutely loved it

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou again and im so glad tou liked it- yes a connection shared by two can be mind blowing- 🌹

[Abhishek Izy]

And so is your write

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for your kindness🌹

[Gaurav]

A nice read indeed. A subtle flow that is maintained and is effectively felt. Thank you for sharing :)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for caring and stopping by- truly appreciated🌹

[Neville]

The whole of this is far greater than the sum of its parts... penned in true 'Thoughts in Time'esque' fashion... nice one Kelly...... N

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

And thanking you kind sir-🌹

[Neville]

my pleasure, so it is.... N

[midniterider]

sometimes our dreams just don`t happen,but it`s great when they do

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Oh yes- never stop dreaming....some day somewhere ..some day all shall be as it must...Thankyou again🌹

[midniterider]

my pleasure

[Chris Shaw]

Beautifully penned and romantic poetry. Lines of longing. "one day, you'll be mine". May your dreams come true. All good wishes

Chris

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

You are so right- I wrote it for a special someone but alas it didn’t turn out to be as I wished- that’s y I posted it here- time tells all- Thankyou for readibg🌹

[Chris Shaw]

Sorry it didn't work out. Lovely to remember though in your poem. Always to be remembered.
read moreSorry it didn't work out. Lovely to remember though in your poem. Always to be remembered.

Chris

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Some things I guess are just not meant to be - we live we learn - Thankyou for your kindness🌹

[Chris Shaw]

We do live and learn and I wish you better happiness in the times ahead.

Chris

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you and I am sending you a hug for your flowers ((( ))). Most appreciated.

Chris

[Nyx Star]

Beautifully penned. Your words flow like water.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

THankyou for your lovely words🌹

[heartsinice]

The story had a nice tempo, time travel through words described classically and on point.
This was my favorite line
"Deserting
The you
Inside me-
To be a part
Of two hearts
Becoming
One
At the rising
Of the sun- "

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

I’m so glad you found essence in my words- out of body into spirit we need to travel to feel what’s true- Thankyou 🌹

[lightsong]

how I love Your note my dearest Kelly, never fear love, never fear the feelings the sensations which sweep through You, surrender to it, and come to me... how passionately, beautifully, confidently, You speak to Your love, giving him comfort and assurance, some gorgeous images You've gifted us, something like,

"Moonbeams
Sewing the seams
Of two lovers
Dreams ..."

Thank You, for always singing with such a passionate loving voice.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for your appreciation and deep understanding and knowing of what the heart speaks- each word written felt and meant in their own special unique loving manner- not fully understood or cherished as put to paper- we cannot lose hope- praying for that love to be found for each of us - only the heart knows where the truth shows- love and blessings 🌹

[KCthelastboyscout]

Sensual and passionate
A strong yearning for human contact
A pleasure to read..

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

We write what we feel- Thankyou for your time - hope you are well🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful poem shared dear Kelly. Somethings if we touch. Make us want to return to our dying day. Love wishes, if come true. Permanent tattoo of a lasting memory. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Pleasure is mine Thankyou for your time- like that thought- permanent tattoo- if I ever have a totoo think it will be a dream catcher - separate good from bad🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

I love your work dear Kelly. You have a Poet's heart.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou my dearest Coyote- maybe one day we’ll do discuss poetry over a cup of coffee...🌹